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Leaving Gently

Each morning as I wake my eyes will seek the sky be it blue or heavy overcast my spirit lifts in flight - to behold the natural world is a miracle of being when I reach my final hour let the light touch my skin no shadow’s cloying weight give me a room bathed in sun or a view of rain quenched earth trees flush with living green let it be an ordinary day familiar as I’ve often spent with nothing overwrought - a bird may cry overhead perhaps some errant clouds like me passing out of sight.

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Date: 3/13/2024 12:48:00 PM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your work
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Michele Fermanis-Winward
Date: 3/13/2024 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Yolanda, I am greatful for your comment.
Date: 3/4/2024 6:40:00 PM
Dear Michelle, this is a wonderful poem filled with such quiet grace. The daily ritual of seeking the sky, the desire for a peaceful, ordinary departure – it's deeply moving. The poem doesn't shy away from mortality, but embraces it with a quiet acceptance of nature's cycle. The image of the bird's cry and the "errant clouds" speaks to the beauty of impermanence. This is a thoughtful and touching piece.- Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/3/2024 8:27:00 PM
A beautifully expressed poem every day a gift , something many of us take for granted .
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Michele Fermanis-Winward
Date: 3/3/2024 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, I really appreciate your comment.
Date: 3/3/2024 7:29:00 PM
delicately expressed - well phrased here
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Michele Fermanis-Winward
Date: 3/3/2024 8:56:00 PM
Thank you Mat, Your comment means a lot to me.

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