Leaving

What is November but October's leaving ~ stripped naked, shivering

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/23/2023 5:25:00 PM

Well said my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2023 8:10:00 PM

Thanks, Brother Jerry! ~ T.O.N.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/23/2023 8:02:00 AM

perfectly said, gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2023 8:04:00 PM

Perfection and I don't usually appear in the same sentence. Much appreciated, Ilene. Thanks! :) gw

James Horn

Date: 11/22/2023 6:48:00 PM

Right on. You are hard to stay up with.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/22/2023 6:52:00 PM

I'm just doing my bit for humanity, James. Trying to avoid insanity...

John Lawless

Date: 11/22/2023 4:05:00 PM

oh you wascally wabbit you.....

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/22/2023 6:51:00 PM

I'm just kwazy, nevew wascally. Get it stwaight, OK?

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/22/2023 3:44:00 PM

brief but well said, Gershon. I agree...November seems to ride on October's coat tails but with a lot less clothing. Also clever. I enjoyed it. Have a splendid Thanksgiving, Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/22/2023 3:30:00 PM

Hello Gershon, hyes winter is on the way. all i have been getting is freezing rain. Without the snowfall. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Terry Flood

Date: 11/22/2023 3:15:00 PM

Aha… so November is simply October’s goosebumps. brrrrrrrr!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/22/2023 6:50:00 PM

Novembrrrrr can s/t be nicer than October, esp. in Chicago. Then Thanksgiving comes and the temperature plum-mets. Such a shame...