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Leading Me To Sunday

Wasn't written in the scriptures you'd be found twin bunnies hopping along side with the summer little Ronny Johnson's sister tagging right along stolen glances and secret kisses swinging together on the old tire swing back before father called you home That was then before painted memories hung out on the front porch with lemon tea refreshments sparkled a quite midnight sky loving hands held in a most romantic way warming hearts and projecting missed moments waiting patiently for my Sunday to come again

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Date: 2/28/2017 3:50:00 PM
Me too...thanks for lovely comment
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Date: 2/26/2017 11:59:00 PM
Tim, sounds like a different world, and I guess it was. : ) Well done. To think of that time - hmm... You know, all in all I wouldn't want to go back, not through all those years before age 20 or so, anyway. ; )
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Date: 2/26/2017 6:15:00 PM
Very romantic and well written!
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Date: 2/26/2017 8:00:00 AM
Tim, your poem brings back the glow of youth and innocence... Love this one <3
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Date: 2/26/2017 12:59:00 AM
This is one sweet picture you are painting there my friend.... I love every word of it :)
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:21:00 PM
Oh tim, this is a very romantic poem about youthful love. To wish for that special day to come again and again. I knew the feeling so well. Love this one.
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:28:00 PM
this is a very tender and touching poem, tim! i very much enjoyed it...
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Date: 2/25/2017 3:36:00 PM
This is so beautiful and special Tim. What a grate poem . A favorite :)
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Date: 2/25/2017 3:37:00 PM
*Great
Date: 2/25/2017 1:54:00 PM
Fried chicken Sundays, picnics and Aunt Ella telling you how much you've grown. Wish I could still hear her ask...
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Date: 2/25/2017 1:09:00 PM
I remember when everyday seemed like Sunday:) Now like you, I wait. Beautiful poem, Tim:)
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Date: 2/25/2017 12:08:00 PM
...what a lovely, breath of fresh air poem, Tim :-) your sentiments are so touching and sweet, I wish to Be in this endearing vignette :-) Splendid writing, so joyful to read. blessings, lynn
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Date: 2/25/2017 11:53:00 AM
Oh, Tim, you made me long for my parents' front porch.
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