Lead Us From Darkness To Light

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“Ceasing to sway, get out of your own way ~ That love and light bursts forth, like a sun ray” ~ quote, by poet ____________________________ Believing ourselves to be mind-body, we pursue objects of our heart's desire, more oft than not, employing thoughts shoddy, immersed in delusion, until we tire, whereupon we internalise focus, shifting baton of awareness to heart, divine entwined along the love locus, deeming all souls as one, with none apart, ascending thus, along octaves of love, as bubbling joy becomes rapturous bliss, enabled when head and heart, hand in glove, feeling here now complete, nothing amiss. We stoop to conquer, when we surrender, as resounds within, soundless bliss thunder. 04-July-2022 HMS, Rhymezone Theme: Life It's All About Three Q's Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 8/5/2022 6:02:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my contest with your beautiful Quatorzain, excellent writing, and I love your image and quote, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 8/5/2022 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Constance! Another form learnt because of your inspiration and prompting :)
Date: 8/4/2022 9:57:00 AM
Seeker, you have so skillfully blended each stage of life into a seamless journey of the body-soul into a state of bliss. This is so lyrical while taking difficult concepts and making them look easy. This truly is a pilgrimage! Congratulations on your win! Blessings on wings of bliss to you!
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Date: 8/4/2022 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. It’s not difficult to pen, if it’s our lived experience :)
Date: 8/1/2022 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/quote. What a wonderful ending. Have a blessed day/week writing way.................
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Date: 8/1/2022 6:29:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula! God bless you always
Date: 8/1/2022 5:57:00 AM
I am mesmerized by this spiritual poem. A fav and congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 8/1/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, Linda and am delighted you’ve marked this as a fave :)
Date: 8/1/2022 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful lines of wisdom Seeker... "we internalize focus, shifting baton of awareness to heart"... Loved this line... Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful write... Today network here is as slow as tortoise...Lol... I have been trying to give my return comments for the past one hour.... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/1/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Ani, God bless!
Date: 7/31/2022 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations on you win US. I always come back with something from your honorable teachings. Namaste`
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:11:00 PM
Oh, this has won? Let me have a look at the other entries then. So happy you liked the poem, Anaya :)
Date: 7/4/2022 6:35:00 PM
it is in the surrendering that we learn to live with a heart wide open and trusting, I really enjoyed your poem this evening. S. thank you
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:05:00 PM
Heart trusting, yet mind discerning, otherwise we better get good at forgiving!
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose! Giving this a final look before entering it for Constance’s contest. Maybe I’ll add a quote on the top, if I come up with something.
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