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Aux Mort (To The Dead) Ossary - Closed To THe PublicImage result for aux morts ossuary

I took  a trip to Paris, France and of course I wanted to see all the attractions,
walk the boulevards, see the museums and art galleries, linger at an outdoor
cafe watching people stroll while  sipping on wine and munching on cheese and
bread. I wanted to float down the Seine by boat at night.  But my reason, for
this trip was to go to Le Pere Lachaise Cemetery, for that is where my family 
ancestors are buried. I knew it would not be easy to find them as this cemetery
is huge, spread over 110 acres, over one million people buried there since 1804.

I walk the paths
lingering at mossy tombs:
a thousand birds sing

It is an amazing cemetery with many famous people buried there like Chopin,
Oscar Wilde, Monet, Voltaire, Degras and thousands more, but also ordinary 
people.  From simple unadorned headstones to huge towering monuments.
One needs a guide map to navigate the roads and pathways through this maze
of stone.  I finally had to go to the office for direction and help to locate my 
ancestors grave sites.

death has no time
for in my heart you exist
the smell of decay:

I found out some disturbing information, the plots are leased for 50, 30, 10
years and if not renewed the remains are removed, boxed and tagged and 
moved to Aux Morts Assuary in a single tomb.  When the Assuary gets over-
crowed the remains are removed, incinerated and the ashes returned.  
And that is where my ancestors are, nothing but ashes in eternal storage.  The
Aux Morts (To the Dead) Assuary is closed to the public, I found that very
odd and it made me quite sad.  Why, what are they hiding?

And those plots where the remains were removed from are re-leased to others,
well that is how the cemetery can keep up on the burials, apparently there is a
long waiting list.  I am happy my family plot is in a cemetery in Canada where
the remains of those buried will never be touched.

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July 25, 2017

Haibun/Le Pere Lachaise Cemetery
Copyright Protected, ID 923378



Written for the Haibun Contest
Sponsor Debbie Guzzi

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/28/2017 7:18:00 AM
Greetings, BW!! Congrats for your well-deserved top placement in the contest, with this captivating piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:43:00 PM
Congrad's & thank you yet again for making a wonderful entry to my contest. Light & Love
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Date: 8/26/2017 2:01:00 PM
I love visiting cemeteries (so does Arthur Vaso)!! I also love this top winning entry which has all the necessary requisites of a haibun. Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:11:00 PM
It's not so hard to believe, land in Paris I'm sure is at a premium. 110 acres, wow, still it seems so indifferent to the memories of your family members. Congratulations Constance, interesting write...
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:44:00 PM
Gosh how sad to think your final resting place may not be as final as you originally planned - fascinating haibun Constance:-0)congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:50:00 PM
How interesting BW. Very informative, I enjoyed reliving this trip with you. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful write through the whole Haibun, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win : ) ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:21:00 PM
Wow! A very interesting write! Even your "final" resting place, may not be so. This was a winner! Congrats!!
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Date: 8/3/2017 4:07:00 PM
It is really quite normal - Cemetries really do have to make their money - But no matter what - The aura of the dead remain there and you did well to visit - I am sure you felt very poignat on visiting this cemetery and that in itself is never forgot with or without a grave - Indiana x x x
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:11:00 AM
lovely thoughtful write. i've always wanted to see this place. maria callas' ashes were stolen & then mysteriously reappeared - very odd. in england, we used to have charnel houses, where bones were put after being removed from graves (for others to be buried) & sometimes, eventually, the bones were burnt.
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Date: 7/26/2017 8:27:00 AM
Sad to hear such things happen, Constance, well written:)
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Date: 7/25/2017 10:14:00 PM
Fascinating write my friend! I am intrigued about this cemetery now! Wouldn't mind seeing the beauty that it portrays, as your glorious poem has skillfully described! You have me in wonder by your incredible words, such awesome Haiku within your Haibun, I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/25/2017 9:40:00 PM
Very interesting BW. I am likewise interested in family history. Good luck in this contest. - Dean
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