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Lazarus Asleep

the rain falls warm, the air is warm pinched in the middle days of winter the air is faceless in singularity before the sun is even spent the ghosts have eaten all there was to eat and the woman says we shall never go this way again the mourners, them veiled in frayed black lace the old womens' votive weeping singing spells at the old and wretched gate fine carriages have carried them off the glass in the window crafted eloquent in the chthonic fall of their tears stained, maybe by the gripping slip of fingers at the river's weaving edge long fingers strong from birth we shall never go this way again what is the color why the grasses grow so wild. ravenous over what? what is left whatever the farthest from the blindness of the indesinent night thought of with such tremble, temple, and pine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/8/2015 2:12:00 PM
Very well penned with good use of metaphors bringing the essence of your feelings to the surface like so much drift wood scattered on the waves. You're creative and innovative in your subject matter. The words are descriptive and scratch their message onto the page with a refined vocabulary and sharp quill. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:29:00 PM
I was really swept up by the rhythm. Thank you for your comments also :)
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:19:00 PM
Outstanding piece which bowled me over with its intensity, imagery, and flow! Well done, Michael! I enjoyed reading this wonderful write! Pandita
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Date: 2/1/2015 12:06:00 PM
a deep, reflective write underscoring fine symbolisms and imagery... wonderful, Michael.. huggs
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Michael Miers
Date: 2/1/2015 1:54:00 PM
wow. thank you very much. I appreciate it. I enjoy your work also.
Date: 1/31/2015 9:54:00 PM
Original, well put together. And a couple of words I don't know. Alright!
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