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Lazarus Asleep

the rain falls warm, the air is warm
pinched
in the middle days of
winter

the air is faceless in singularity
before the sun is even
spent

the ghosts have eaten all there was
to eat
and the woman says
we shall never go this way
again

the mourners, them veiled in frayed black lace
the old womens' votive weeping 
singing spells
at the old and wretched gate

fine carriages have carried them off
the glass in the window crafted eloquent
in the chthonic fall of their 
tears
stained, maybe
by the gripping slip of fingers
at the river's weaving
edge

long fingers strong from birth
we shall never go this way again

what is the color
why the grasses grow so wild.  ravenous
over what?  what is left
whatever the farthest from the blindness of the indesinent  night
thought of with such
tremble, temple, and
pine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/8/2015 2:12:00 PM
Very well penned with good use of metaphors bringing the essence of your feelings to the surface like so much drift wood scattered on the waves. You're creative and innovative in your subject matter. The words are descriptive and scratch their message onto the page with a refined vocabulary and sharp quill. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:29:00 PM
I was really swept up by the rhythm. Thank you for your comments also :)
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:19:00 PM
Outstanding piece which bowled me over with its intensity, imagery, and flow! Well done, Michael! I enjoyed reading this wonderful write! Pandita
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Date: 2/1/2015 12:06:00 PM
a deep, reflective write underscoring fine symbolisms and imagery... wonderful, Michael.. huggs
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Michael Miers
Date: 2/1/2015 1:54:00 PM
wow. thank you very much. I appreciate it. I enjoy your work also.
Date: 1/31/2015 9:54:00 PM
Original, well put together. And a couple of words I don't know. Alright!
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