Lavish

Lavish love leaps Dance dreamy deep Poise plunders play Daze dazzles day Lift limpid laughs Set succinct stuff Brave bubbly burst Treat troubling thirst Live lavish love Apt art above Apt ample art Heal hurting heart Leon Enriquez 05 May 2018 Hamlet Place, ACT

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Frank Mashina

Date: 9/3/2024 5:45:00 AM

Bernard, your vertical monocrostic for Bren M. Bongcay’s birthday is a creative and uplifting tribute. The positive message conveyed through the acrostic form, with a focus on assurance and erasing negativity, is both meaningful and fitting for a celebration. Nicely done!, Frank

Frank Mashina

Date: 9/3/2024 5:39:00 AM

James, your poem captures a series of sensory and emotional moments with striking imagery. The blend of everyday actions and deeper reflections creates a vivid, almost surreal experience. Well done!, Frank

Frank Mashina

Date: 9/3/2024 5:33:00 AM

Leon, your quatrain elegantly conveys the harmony and clarity that come with peace of mind. The rhythm and choice of words create a soothing and uplifting atmosphere. Well done on capturing such a positive and insightful message!, Frank

Frank Mashina

Date: 9/3/2024 5:28:00 AM

This is a deeply resonant piece, Mahtab. The way you capture the tension between imposed leadership and the feelings of the oppressed is powerful. Your words bring to light the complex emotions that arise from such situations, making the poem both thought-provoking and relatable. Well done!, Frank

Frank Mashina

Date: 9/3/2024 5:22:00 AM

This is such a beautifully crafted and rhythmic piece, Leon! The playful alliteration and vivid imagery create a captivating flow, making it a joy to read. Each line feels like a little burst of energy and emotion. Well done!, Frank

Leon Enriquez
Date: 9/12/2024 9:08:00 AM

Dear Frank: Thank you. Leon