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Lauras Response What You Gonna Do

"WHAT YOU GONNA DO, WHEN YOU LIVE IN A SHOE" ~Written For Mystic Roses niece~ What you gonna do, when you live in a shoe? Gonna weep or sleep, say cock-al-doo-dal-doo! Hide by the mouse, living in the house, I'm in here so long, I actually grew! I finally belong, big and strong, I'm a kangaroo! dance, sing a song, eat chocolate fondue! What you gonna do when you live in a shoe? Drum ding-dong, Then say adieu! Response written by: Laura Loo ~Date Written: March 18, 2016~

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Date: 3/20/2016 2:55:00 PM
very cute children's poem!
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:20:00 AM
nicely written Laura, well penned
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:42:00 AM
thank you white sage :)-luloo
Date: 3/18/2016 10:29:00 PM
Oh, this is so whimsical and sweet LauraLoo! Great poem :)
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Date: 3/18/2016 10:31:00 PM
Many thanks Laura! Have a great weekend... :)-luloo

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