Laundry Day

angry thoughts
sad and sour
laundry day

which is clean
which is not
no matter

it will come
out in the
wash cycle

NB: Other form – Tricube: 3x3x3, 3 syllables per line, 3 stanzas; inspired by, but not entered in, Sara Kendrick's Tricube Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Poteet Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 1:34 PM
my thoughts when that day comes, be prepared and wash just in case someone wants it who knows clean/dirty. Great tricube. One things for sure - the laundry never really gets DONE.
Fowler Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Never ending, just like the dishes...thanks for stopping by Reason. :)
George Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 3:43 AM
Interesting and equally true. Laundry day is a messy day with no rest and is detested by women in general. I can relate to your feelings, Linda
Fowler Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Hi Valsa. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Faulkner Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Funny, today is laundry day for me, but I've been putting it off! Time to clean off those sad and sour thoughts~
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 5:39 PM
You betcha - wash them away Michelle! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Well written, dear Linda. I must do the laundry myself. Lovely poem.
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Thank you dear Victor. :)
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:42 AM
- A good one, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. A new form challenges me to write more than one, to make sure I do it correctly. LOL hugs :)
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