Laughter Is the Best Medicine Contest

HAIR GARDEN~

My mans looks like a Mr. Clean,
think's being bald makes him obscene,
tried a hair tonic,
dome he applied it,
now's got Chia hair that is garden green.



10-13-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Hey...I'll take summa that tonic please! Enjoyed ~j
Hoffman Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Sure thing lim'rick, lol!! :)
Scars Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:16 AM
hahaha great one Cheryl :) Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Hoffman Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Thanks so much luloo!:)
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:02 PM
Hi Cheryl, Lol! Great humor and imagery as well. Congratulations on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis
Hoffman Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Thanks so much Alexis, it made my day!:)
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Great humour Cheryl:-) your syllable count was slightly off:-) Many congrats on your 3rd place :-) hugs Jan xx
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October 21, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Thanks so much Jan, you just made my day! Hugs back~Che xx
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October 13, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Winner!
Hoffman Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Thanks so much Mike!:)
Michelle Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Nicely crafted Cheryl :) A wonderful piece Love, Juli-Michelle
Hoffman Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much Juli; writing limericks is all new to me but gave it a whirl!:) Love, Che
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