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Laughter- the Luxury Reflex

She was a jolly woman in her prime, a beauty And she had a crush on the man who made her laugh So thus enamored, she asked him, “Will you marry me? She married to the whole man just only for his laugh. A luxury reflex without having any apparent utility. He laughed and made her laugh with silly sounds Like a bad actor in a Dudley Do Right play. He laughed with the people and at the people She then listened to the actual sound of his laugh. It didn’t make her heart go pitter patter But infuriated her and weighed on her And proved a bad medicine not healing her mind. A day came when he laughed her out of his life. Now reconsidering proper laughter the best medicine She’s looking for the whole man with a real laughter.
+++ August 24, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Will you Marry Me by Judy Konos

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Date: 9/29/2014 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Mehta. I'm glad to see this received a high place here. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:06:00 AM
- Dr. Ram, congrats with your winning poem - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Mehta for your win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:01:00 AM
Thank You for entering my contest!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/28/2014 5:24:00 AM
Thanks, Judy, for picking up my poem.
Date: 9/27/2014 10:33:00 AM
Huge congrats on ur awesome win on a fabulous write Dr Ram!
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Dr. Metha on your number 1 win with this fine write.
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:10:00 AM
very amusing write Dr Mehta:-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 9/6/2014 2:09:00 PM
Wonderfully said Dr. Mehta. Laughter is a wonderful thing, but only if it's not at the expense of someone else. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/5/2014 10:12:00 PM
Dr Ram :) Congratulations, on your awesome win. Many, many thanks for supporting my contest. Stop by and enjoy my newest blog, "Thoughts." if you'd like. Good night, LUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/5/2011 3:57:00 AM
A day came when he laughed her out of his life, Wow. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/4/2011 3:28:00 PM
Loved this poem, the way it took a dramatic turn. Intelligent write Dr Ram...Congratulations on your win. Gautami
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:25:00 PM
Your're right. We need to wait for the right kind of laughter. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:22:00 PM
Love this little story on laughter! Congrats on your win in the contest! Ellen
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Dr. Ram in Desiree's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in Reconsidering Laughter contest with this magnificent marvelous entry .. enjoy your very special honor for wonderful words with luv.. so happy to be acknowledged on the same winners list with u luv..
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Deseree's contest, Dr. Ram! Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/4/2011 11:30:00 AM
cheers for the fine win, dr.ram... :) huggs
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congrats on all your wins : ) Jack
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:13:00 PM
haha, this is funny. Too much of a good thing a bad thing. Very well illustrated.
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Date: 4/1/2011 5:26:00 PM
very well said!
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:09:00 PM
you always have words of wisdom for us have missed being around the soup!!
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:05:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sometimes things that are initially enjoyable become annoying after awhile in a marriage..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I am healing and it seems like it is a slow process but it has only been two weeks and two days..Sara
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:59:00 PM
Best wishes in the contest....
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