Laugh Cry

Laugh Cry Laugh cry run dry Reaching laughing high Holding tiers lonely lie Bursting out with a sigh losing pride weakness Emotions control told Who what where when Feelings pretend Man no cry from eye I cry I laugh I enjoy Freedom feelings My laugh my cry With pride I sigh

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/13/2017 10:07:00 PM

I truly enjoyed your sad and emotional write Niall. You always amaze me with your poetry. I hope you have a lovely weekend my friend. Hugs! :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 10/14/2017 5:20:00 AM

Hi Susan , thank you my friend , I too hope your weekend is lovely ;;)))))) hugs

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/28/2017 4:30:00 PM

I believe that instant emotional reactions do not pretend no time to prepare. But yes unfortunately feelings can be co-opted for purposes of manipulation. Aorry your poem just got me thinking about a gnarly problem I have right now. Funny I should happen on this poem, for me it holds some serious truths. Well done.

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/28/2017 6:00:00 PM

Hi Patricia , yes it is one of those writes that holds pain ::)))hugs

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/28/2017 4:32:00 PM

Supposed to be 'sorry'.

Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 10:04:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/22/2017 8:06:00 AM

Hi Funom , thanks for comment:))

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/4/2017 4:01:00 PM

Trust me, all men cry. Lol!

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/4/2017 5:56:00 PM

Hi Akkina , I cry a lot chopping onions ,, hehehe ,, ps I have had my moments :)))))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2017 2:51:00 PM

- "Real men" are crying too ... everyone has feelings, Niall - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/1/2017 3:08:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , thanks for comment , freedom of speech and feelings :))))hugs