Lauder and Lauder

Ever give your man a compliment
     and hear a deaf response?
Laud’s louder and sarcastic
     the second go around.

9/19/2021
Bite Size Poem no21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 10:12 AM
A slice of truth Kim! Have read that men only hear one thing at a time while women hear all the sounds around them. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 3:35 PM
lol…thank you, Sam.
La France Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Kim, wonderful and congratulations in your win in Line's contest, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Blessing, Constance! Thank you!
Alex Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 10:28 PM
Ironic, indeed! Men are good, yet! Great writing. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Absolutely! Bantering between the spouses…lol
Seeker Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Clever, creative word play, loved it! Congrats on your win, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Your "LAUDER AND LAUDER" is so very true. Few words with so much said. Love This One. Have a blessed day.................
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Paula! xx
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 10:01 PM
In bite size words you have said a mouthful.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 6:34 AM
LOL..
Brewer Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Compact and incisive; no wasted words here. Love the play on words, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Brewer Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Compact and incisive - no wasted words here - live the play on words, Kim
Mcintosh Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Cute... God bless you Kim. Love to you, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Gina!
DiMino Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 5:53 AM
A good beer and steak -- sadly, its true. Great sense of humor. After all is said and done, would you expect anything else of us -- I think, for even God, at times, to love men must be a struggle.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Thank you, Joe! An observation…lol.
Kannan Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 5:52 AM
That's a good one, Kim... Lovely...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thank you, Supraja!
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 1:55 AM
Even a grunt would do lol. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:02 AM
LOL…right?!
Strand Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 1:13 AM
Neat bite Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thanks, Brian :)
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