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Late Evening On Ferguson Pier

It's a place I know, my feet familiar with each timber plank that deck the way, the smooth ones and the ones buckled and raised ready to trip an old man's foot. I know the name of every boat moored along its length, the repertoire of sounds played by the tides and restless swells, its intimate whispers. It could be any place but for me it's here in the solemn quiet of a late evening on the end of the pier, when the world returns to an order, gathers in the strewn pieces of itself like scattered toys on a playroom floor and puts them back into a labeled drawer. The time when hurry settles and strung nerves are loosened and soothed by sleep. For a moment the world fits neatly here, snug in this small pocket of calm on the end of Ferguson Pier. In the distance, city lights float on a dreaming bay as the tide silently ticks the evening and me away.

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Date: 4/15/2023 6:35:00 AM
How peaceful and relaxing this is, Paul. Wish I was there to enjoy it with you. have a great weekend mate:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/15/2023 6:58:00 AM
Special place particularly on still nights. Thanks Daniel for taking it in, cheers mate.
Date: 4/14/2023 7:46:00 AM
I just adored this! Sank right into it, feeling it from the soles of my feet to my mind - just as intended. I've just holidayed somewhere beautiful and we caught many amazing places without tourists around by going when there was break in the weather or just before sunset. Knowing somewhere as intimately as this sounds wonderful. Thank you for sharing, it's going in my favourites
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/14/2023 7:00:00 PM
So pleased that the poem made it into your mind, thanks Dilly for giving it your time. The pier is in walking distance from home and it is a place I go to find balance and peace. We all need places like these to connect to. Gives the soul a chance to have a break from the body that carries it around.
Date: 4/14/2023 7:14:00 AM
Paul….what an amazing poem….l didn't want it to end honestly! I felt a real connection and understanding to your words! Love it! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/14/2023 6:54:00 PM
Most appreciative of your positive comments Deb. It good to know when a poem releases some of the feelings that gave it birth and is felt by the reader. This poem meant something to me when writing and so your words have significance. Thankyou.

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