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Late August

... in a sunny spell down in brightest part of the dell we spot black clusters at full swell. Ready to pick but there's a catch. We must break through a thorny patch, for we can't just reach out and snatch. We start to learn rules of the game that teach us there is blood and pain when precious fruit we come to claim. To make us pay for berries black nature's weaponry gives us flack. Whiplashing thorns our flesh attack. Accepting that the price is blood we persevere and soon make good, down in that dell of August wood.

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Date: 8/30/2021 3:04:00 PM
what wonderful description Tony, we had thornless blackberries when i was growing up - saves a lot of pain!:-) hugs jan xx
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 9/4/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Jan. Will be collecting the berries soon. But in these parts the thorns are on the defence. Tony X
Date: 8/30/2021 1:07:00 PM
One of the things I enjoy this time of year is picking blackberries. Been to battle, got some scars but worth it. Enjoy your berries and enjoyed your poem. Emilia : )
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 9/4/2021 8:27:00 AM
Many thanks Emilia. Yes, I shall be out collecting the berries soon. And I will pay with blood. 'Tis the game: no pain, no gain. But feel no shame. I don't complain. Best wishes. Tony

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