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Latch Key Kid

A boy sits on house steps (cement arid) removing the crust from his egg salad sandwich sparrows snatch the broken morsels he throws at them laced bonds like a companionship weave a shield from solitude He savours the egg salad his mother has left for him comfort food like the joyous presto an orchestra plays His mother, swept aside by work from noon till six, allows his independence in a latch key that dangles from his neck deserving of protection a latch key that opens the fall out of misplaced pairing for a child knowing everything doesn't always work out A boy's resolve that a crusty dollup of sadness isn't a full meal that life spooled out by a plundered sense of normal doesn't prevent a new dimension of self that sometimes in the erasure of a full family there's a moon walk to find one's footing His calm blue gaze picking up clues establishing connections a focus from his core as a family of sparrows pecks at the crumbs Poem composed: June 25, 2022 Received an NA July 24th/22

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Date: 3/6/2023 8:07:00 PM
I feel sorry for the boy. I want to hug him while offering him a cookie and lemonade like his mother probably would. I feel sad for her too, as I imagine she is tired and misses "connecting" with her sweet sparrow. Bless the boy and his mother.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/6/2023 8:35:00 PM
Hello Marikate, Yes the boy is a lost fellow with his latch key about his neck. And yet, there is a resolve in him to find his footing despite his splintered family. Your sympathy for him speaks well of you. The poem draws on my own past as a kid in a dysfunctional home. Thank you for your stop by + message. Be well. Brian
Date: 1/11/2023 9:54:00 PM
Interesting contrast of the boy's absence of parental supervision with the family of sparrows united.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/11/2023 10:08:00 PM
Yes, you are quite right, Juliet, there is that contrast between the two families, and yet each goes on, pecking at crumbs - a survival metaphor. Thank you for your insight. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/20/2022 3:34:00 PM
An emotional and challenging perspective to write about, and you accomplished this feat in verse using metaphor and rhythm. This is a subject I confess my ignorance. As I read the poem, I couldn't help but think how people who work for a living (struggling with pride to raise their children) are disrespected in today's Western culture.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/20/2022 9:50:00 PM
Hello Dennis, I appreciate your thoughtful correspondence. Yes, a single mom certainly struggles to raise a child with a strong moral centre. And you are quite correct, there is a resilient pride in such a challenge often tarrred by public disrespect. Thank you for your insight. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 10/17/2022 7:56:00 PM
Beautiful with an interesting ending. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/17/2022 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj. Yes the ending has a family of sparrows united as they eat sparse sandwich crumbs. The boy's family is sparse due to the absent father + working mother, yet while there may be crumbs, there is resolve to survive - even though in life, not everything is whole. Be well dear fellow. Brian
Date: 10/17/2022 12:50:00 PM
Brian, this poem about the reality of so many families and children really tugs at my heart. Seems like families in these situations are like the sparrows that "peck at the crumbs." Wonderfully written going to the sympathetic heart. Blessings. Many thanks for this poem.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/17/2022 3:27:00 PM
Greetings Sam, My appreciation for your positive response to my submission. Very perceptive of you - the family indeed pecks at the crumbs for sustainability.I knew the topic would not be popular whatever structural merits the poem might have. Hence the first NA tag. I was grateful for the 2nd chance. I drew on my own experience as a latch key kid. Thanks again, Brian
Date: 10/16/2022 9:18:00 AM
You have my heartfelt congratulations on winning my contest, Brian. You have written a remarkable poem that is built with many various levels of beauty.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/16/2022 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Lassad for the recognition of this piece that received an earlier NA in another contest. Best wishes. Brian
Date: 7/3/2022 6:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading about the latch key child from the child's perspective. I looked for this one before but did not find it. I appreciate your visits to my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/3/2022 7:08:00 AM
Greetings Sara. I thought my piece would not be popular given the isolation the boy endures from a splintered family. However, I drew on personal experience as the poem's base. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 7/3/2022 3:41:00 AM
Excellent Brian. It plays out like a scene from a film. There's a certain pathos to it all. I feel sorry for the child. I'm reminded of the film Kes in a roundabout way. You set the scene beautifully. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/3/2022 7:05:00 AM
Your views, Gary, are most appreciated. There is a pathos to the boy's situation, yet he resolves a better future. Memories of latch key days sparked the write. Best wishes, Brian

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