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A better man, she’d never met. Within a month, their stage was set. Each was the other’s biggest fan. She’d never met a better man. A love so sweet, he’d never felt. With lovely ring in hand, he knelt. Their future plans were then complete. He’d never felt a love so sweet. In six small rooms, they made a life, enjoyed good times, and weathered strife. Then children came, two lovely blooms. They made a life in six small rooms. ***************** Their anniversary, today. is number forty. Both will say that they’re so blessed. It’s plain to see today, their anniversary. Some don’t believe accounts like this; they doubt that life, for some, is bliss. Though many do forever cleave, accounts like this, some don’t believe. April 20, 2019, entered in Carol Connell's Swap Meet Poetry Contest Placed 2nd December 28, 2019, entered in Brian Strand's Strand Special 11

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Date: 12/29/2019 4:27:00 PM
Congrats on HM!;)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/29/2019 6:44:00 PM
THANKS, Brenda! Janice
Date: 5/1/2019 9:07:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! I rejoice with you... God bless you.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/2/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Beata! Janice
Date: 5/1/2019 6:40:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem of life and joy Janice. A joy to read from top to bottom. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Charlie :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/1/2019 8:17:00 AM
Charlie, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 4/30/2019 4:06:00 PM
back with congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/30/2019 5:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, P.S. Janice
Date: 4/25/2019 1:10:00 PM
Lovely story, beautiful words, nicely written. BRAVO
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/25/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, P.S. Janice
Date: 4/22/2019 5:14:00 AM
What a beautiful poem.Janice. I absolutely love this and wonder if it was written for people you know personally. If so they would have been thrilled to receive such a unique gift and reminder of their lasting love.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2019 8:23:00 AM
Actually, I could give the poem to my brother and his wife or to several other couples I know. Thanks so much for your kind words, Wendy. Janice
Date: 4/20/2019 6:09:00 PM
I can speak from experience, we are about to celebrate our 25th anniversary. It feels like we met yesterday and at the same time like we have always been together.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/20/2019 6:46:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. I'm glad to know the poem resonated with you. Janice
Date: 4/20/2019 3:18:00 PM
A sweet theme you chose for the SWAP contest and rendered it gracefully. I enjoyed their story of lasting joy and love..some are indeed blessed! You wrote this well. Best for a win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/20/2019 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for this wonderful encouraging comment, Vijay! Janice

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