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A vast sea of doomed, skeletal walking dead board a train bound for Auschwitz; of the 1,019 aboard, 549 were children. The last ride of their lives. Many too numb to show emotions! Even before that, families separated; little children forced to watch their parents coldly executed by SS forces, before being executed themselves. Upon arrival, tens of thousands packed in at gassing facilities like sardines. Just imagine... the sheer terror of their last moments! How loud were their collective screams before they perished? Oh, the horror! The mass murder of civilians and prisoners of war. Indelible images... of unspeakable evil! Note: This was obviously written for Kai Michael Neumann's contest, but someone beat me for last spot within minutes, but oh well...lol Date written: 04/25/2021

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Date: 5/1/2021 8:13:00 PM
This is very well done..... graphic images are portrayed here and the reader is pulled in. I feel it would have been tough competition for the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/2/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for the lovely feedback and visit, Janis:-)
Date: 4/25/2021 11:09:00 AM
That human tragedy still wails in human hearts--and so does in this emotive write. So well described!
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Date: 4/25/2021 1:37:00 PM
Oh, yes it does! An atrocity that will forever live in infamy! Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 4/25/2021 8:24:00 AM
Edward, I wish you had made the contest because I think your poem would have been at the top or very near the top. Well-done, my friend!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/25/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Milt:-) Most appreciated, my friend!

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