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Last Thought - Haiku

when my time comes round
let my last thought be loving
with soft light abound

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Amanda Mawu

Date: 7/15/2016 10:12:00 AM

Really enjoyed this something I think everyone can relate to

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 10:31:00 PM

Daver, wow..what a thought... wishing this to be my last thought... gees Daver, I hope your time will out last mine... love your haiku...pd

Date: 7/17/2011 12:11:00 PM

Amen! What a wonderful way to go. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2010 3:23:00 PM

awww a very pretty one from you, and SOFT. LUv, Andrea

Date: 12/6/2009 1:20:00 PM

Love this uplifting message. Wonderful last line. Glad to revisit this poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Tamra Amato

Date: 5/5/2009 4:59:00 PM

Daver... this stops me, and feels like a prayer poem, makes me conscious of breath. I love it. Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments on my poems. I needed some positive feedback. I've been feeling insecure lately... that would never stop me from writing. The act of writing has saved me over and over... but I haven't shared with others that much and this soup we're all simmering in is a nourishing community for me. Peace... P.S. do you still haver your submarine book?

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/2/2009 12:02:00 PM

Beautiful sentiment Daver..I love Colorado...don't think I could leave-hubby wants to go to Misery...uh, Missouri is how they spell it..:::giggle:::I'm so glad to have met you! ~Trudy~

Nola Perez

Date: 3/28/2009 2:57:00 PM

I just reread "Last Thought" and printed it out for my refrigerator door. I hope you can feel my hand touching yours. Thanks for "Cat Call" comments. I'm not a Cat anymore, but, no regrets... Love, love

Nola Perez

Date: 3/27/2009 5:26:00 AM

Daver, lovely. May we be blessed in this way. I just got something on the subject which I will send, but not here. Thanks for comments on OH Kay. I didn't know when I started to write the poem, that the sweet baby brother I almost raised, more son than sibling, would play a cameo. It is so fascinating what the poem decides to say.

Arany P.

Date: 3/25/2009 4:30:00 AM

that would be how i would like it too... wonderful haiku, Daver! :) ~ Arany

Date: 3/15/2009 8:29:00 AM

What a wonderful view from a caring soul. Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/11/2009 5:01:00 AM

This is beautiful Daver, I love this and I am faving it. Thank you for your kind comments on "Invisible" as you can probably tell, I have learned that lesson too the hard way, many times, which is where that little poem came from. Blessings to you and have a great day my friend. Love, Amy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2009 9:36:00 AM

Daver, it would be wonderful if we all died with love in our hearts. It's a great way to end earthly life before entering heaven. Beautiful haiku! Love, Carolyn

Alley Poe

Date: 3/9/2009 2:52:00 PM

i agree. sweet write