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Last Tear

Our house makes sounds I never heard before - they're part of the new nightmare-themed decor. Former comfy rooms, styled with love's heartbeat, now seep cold-aches, ice spiked with incomplete. Whether I'm here or there, you're everywhere to ignite more weight inside my despair. This house that was stage for our shared happy has turned gruesome and painfully mocks me. As your adrenaline speed-soars high smiles, your freedom sick-roars motorcycle miles. You know not when your death mile will appear only that it will arrive before my last tear. ... CayCay February 2, 2019

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Date: 2/7/2019 1:24:00 PM
Hi CayCay - a deep heartfelt poem which throbs with emotion. Congrats my dear friend on your win. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/7/2019 3:21:00 AM
- CayCay, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:56:00 PM
Well done Cay-Cay I felt the rumble.I changed the code a few times trying to get a HD.
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Date: 2/6/2019 1:38:00 PM
A different take on the contest.. A bit of darkness and deepness.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:08:00 PM
Hey, Cay-Cay, you did a great job with this theme. I chuckled thinking of the nightmare-themed decor, but really like the way you ended it. Best wishes in Silent One's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:11:00 AM
Somehow a drak poem so beautifully written, dear, CayCay!
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