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Last Summer of the Lonely Widow

The widow turned the air on, closed her door against the summers’ sounds and cooling breeze. She had no friends or allies anymore and family were mere shards of memories. But sometimes, like a captured damsel, she would stand beside her window for a while. Her neighbor sitting on his porch would see her. He'd turn her way, and tip his hat and smile. It might have crossed her mind she could regain some confidence in going out to meet this friendly gent, but at her window pane she stayed as life outside breathed in the heat. Then risking nothing, she would turn away and never know the scent of that one day. 9/16/13 For Laura Loo's the BEST SAD POEM EVER II Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/24/2016 5:12:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 1:15:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea deserving higher accolades, congratulations...
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:46:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:48:00 PM
G'day Andrea... what a great sonnet... just breathes out how and what sonnets are meant to be - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 3/30/2014 8:14:00 PM
In a way this reminds me of how I feel when I see the perso that inspired me to write My Love, she always being nice to me but I to shy to try to go beyond what has already been established (i my case a friendship).
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Date: 11/13/2013 7:25:00 AM
A beautiful piece Andrea and congrats on your win...Kechi
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Date: 10/19/2013 6:10:00 PM
This is a sad poem. If only she made an attempt to go outside and live life. Nice one. love phyl
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:20:00 PM
I love this poem, Andrea, and I can relate to it completely. I have always been a shy person, so I know I have missed out on a lot in life. But, I am only 30 years old, and my life is far from over! I loved this poem so much, that I am adding it to my favorites!...Thank you so much for the great comments! :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:30:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Win. Another great Sonnet.I could feel the sadness and the Loneliness and the fear of venturing outside in the real World. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 9/26/2013 3:54:00 PM
a cool win...........skat
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:31:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 6:58:00 PM
Wonderful image your words were able to create. Every line was very vivid.
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:13:00 AM
Such a sad poem. You described her lonely yearnings perfectly.
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:43:00 PM
A great picture poem. Written with empathy and love. Well done. Allan
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:24:00 AM
Wow.....this was a good write....I could picture the whole scene in my head.
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Date: 9/19/2013 12:32:00 PM
Oh my boo-hoo hoo hoo, No its too sad for ole Joe this type of write.. And why did go and have to make the poor woman like that..? its writes like this that cause me to be going round trying to cheer up just anybody.. And that shall make a nuisance no doubt..Now look what trouble you'll be getting me into..And i thought you were responsible L O L..good to have stopped by..'
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Date: 9/19/2013 9:12:00 AM
"Life outside breathed in the heat" Super! Nothing ventured, nothing gained as the old saying goes. Alas, some are way past the venturing out. Love, daver
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Date: 9/19/2013 6:17:00 AM
Congrats..!!!..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2013 6:46:00 PM
since i am single a widow is a lovely companion to bring her joy and sounds of laughter if only they understand life. . . Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/18/2013 9:21:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem although the image is poignant my very dear friend Andrea. Two thumbs up here. This is another brilliant write my friend. If this is for the contest, i'm sure it will do well again. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck and Big big sweet hugs! love much, Leonora
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Date: 9/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
a sad one.. sometimes u just have to take a chance even ur heart could be at stake.. enjoyed this one, Andrea..
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:32:00 PM
Loved the mystery in this one Andrea....
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Date: 9/17/2013 7:40:00 PM
You are on a poetry roll my friend and so often in the well deserved winner's circles. Congratulations. Wish I had more time to spend here. I am packing for my trip to Disneyland and my family reunion tomorrow.
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:34:00 PM
Well, once again another win from the master Sonneteer...You have captured the essence of true lonliness here my friend...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:02:00 PM
Quite sad really. Thanks Andrea for the very nice comment on my poem Robertx RabCD
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