Last Summer of the Lonely Widow

The widow turned the air on, closed her door against the summers’ sounds and cooling breeze. She had no friends or allies anymore and family were mere shards of memories. But sometimes, like a captured damsel, she would stand beside her window for a while. Her neighbor sitting on his porch would see her. He'd turn her way, and tip his hat and smile. It might have crossed her mind she could regain some confidence in going out to meet this friendly gent, but at her window pane she stayed as life outside breathed in the heat. Then risking nothing, she would turn away and never know the scent of that one day. 9/16/13 For Laura Loo's the BEST SAD POEM EVER II Poetry Contest
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Haight Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Wonderful write Andrea deserving higher accolades, congratulations...
Negron Flores Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:46 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest
Laurie Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:48 PM
G'day Andrea... what a great sonnet... just breathes out how and what sonnets are meant to be - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Tello Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 8:14 PM
In a way this reminds me of how I feel when I see the perso that inspired me to write My Love, she always being nice to me but I to shy to try to go beyond what has already been established (i my case a friendship).
Tello Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 8:15 PM
*person
Odibi Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 7:25 AM
A beautiful piece Andrea and congrats on your win...Kechi
Babcock Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 6:10 PM
This is a sad poem. If only she made an attempt to go outside and live life. Nice one. love phyl
Deschler Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:20 PM
I love this poem, Andrea, and I can relate to it completely. I have always been a shy person, so I know I have missed out on a lot in life. But, I am only 30 years old, and my life is far from over! I loved this poem so much, that I am adding it to my favorites!...Thank you so much for the great comments! :)
Esquire Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Dear Andrea, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Win. Another great Sonnet.I could feel the sadness and the Loneliness and the fear of venturing outside in the real World. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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September 26, 2013 at 3:54 PM
a cool win...........skat
A   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win... always~ Linda
Carter Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 6:58 PM
Wonderful image your words were able to create. Every line was very vivid.
Sirak Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Such a sad poem. You described her lonely yearnings perfectly.
Koven Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 3:43 PM
A great picture poem. Written with empathy and love. Well done. Allan
Hill Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 9:24 AM
Wow.....this was a good write....I could picture the whole scene in my head.
Maverick Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Oh my boo-hoo hoo hoo, No its too sad for ole Joe this type of write.. And why did go and have to make the poor woman like that..? its writes like this that cause me to be going round trying to cheer up just anybody.. And that shall make a nuisance no doubt..Now look what trouble you'll be getting me into..And i thought you were responsible L O L..good to have stopped by..'
Austin Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 9:12 AM
"Life outside breathed in the heat" Super! Nothing ventured, nothing gained as the old saying goes. Alas, some are way past the venturing out. Love, daver
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 6:17 AM
Congrats..!!!..Sara
Morgan Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 6:46 PM
since i am single a widow is a lovely companion to bring her joy and sounds of laughter if only they understand life. . . Congrats on your win. Morgan
Gasun Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:21 AM
This is a very beautiful poem although the image is poignant my very dear friend Andrea. Two thumbs up here. This is another brilliant write my friend. If this is for the contest, i'm sure it will do well again. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck and Big big sweet hugs! love much, Leonora
Minardi Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 7:55 AM
a sad one.. sometimes u just have to take a chance even ur heart could be at stake.. enjoyed this one, Andrea..
Jones Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Loved the mystery in this one Andrea....
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 7:40 PM
You are on a poetry roll my friend and so often in the well deserved winner's circles. Congratulations. Wish I had more time to spend here. I am packing for my trip to Disneyland and my family reunion tomorrow.
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September 17, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Well, once again another win from the master Sonneteer...You have captured the essence of true lonliness here my friend...Congrats - Tim
Davidson Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Quite sad really. Thanks Andrea for the very nice comment on my poem Robertx RabCD
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