Last Sigh

A wooden flute,
              I glimpsed among my mother’s treasured keepsakes in childhood. 
                               being curious, asked her once…
                            I didn’t notice anyone playing the flute! 
       Why it seemed the most precious than everything else she cherished! 

              Hers was the saddest smile when she told me about her brother, 
                              who played the flute when she sang,  
                      passing away from tuberculosis, in his twenties ..

                       the implacable separation from her most loved one..
                          the two efflorescent roses on the same branch… 
                    one fell and perished, when it could have blossomed and 
                               charmed the earth with its fragrance! 

                                  When my mother passed away, 
                                  she asked me to bring the flute, 
             couldn’t believe my eyes ..how much comfort it brought to her, 
       touching and caressing that musical instrument with her fragile fingers…
                                   and her last sigh was peaceful! 

          
                                            September 5, 2021
                              "This Or That - Vol. 6 " Poetry Contest
                                          Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/20/2021 11:19:00 AM
Oh, what a lovely poem, Mala. Your mom holding the flute -- so poignant and precious. Also congratulations!
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Date: 9/11/2021 9:42:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful yet sad story/write. It was good you have the wooden flute from your brother. Have a blessed day/weekend............
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Date: 9/10/2021 11:06:00 AM
Congrats Mala on your win in Edward's contest. A touching, heartfelt write.
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Date: 9/10/2021 8:53:00 AM
Aww... This is just amazing and beautiful... so apt for the theme dear Mala... "two efflorescent roses on the same branch... "... LOVED this line... I see you won in this contest too... Congrats on your well deserved win my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/8/2021 4:34:00 PM
This is so moving!! Touching the very core of the readers's heart...Congratulations...
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:45:00 PM
this is just amazing. I hope it got first place. I am faving this one.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/8/2021 3:52:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. To your fave! such a great honour for me!
Date: 9/8/2021 3:31:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this moving, well-wrtten piece, Mala!:-) Really enjoyed it.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/8/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Edward. It's an honour to be placed with your talented winners.
Date: 9/8/2021 10:30:00 AM
Wonderfully tender story told with the delicacy of a flute's song dear friend. This has deeply touched my heart singing a song of family love. I love it. A fav for me. Congratulations on your win. It is exquisite. Blessings.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/8/2021 3:55:00 PM
Dear Sam, So glad you read the poem! It's a true story - and I cry every time I write about it! A young life lost in its prime! A sister's love can be everlasting!
Date: 9/5/2021 11:55:00 AM
- A beautiful and deeply moving poem, Mala - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/5/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. My mother kept the memory of her brother alive by holding on to the flute.
Date: 9/5/2021 9:30:00 AM
Oh, how sweet it is to see that touch of love of your Mom holding her brother's flute during her last moments. Beautiful.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/5/2021 4:06:00 PM
Thank you, Marilene. Yes, it was a really tender moment I experienced!
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