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glanced at one last rose in my garden!           deep crimson velvety petals - incandescent as luminous horizon at sunset,           when Mother Earth bids adieu to the seven-horse charioteer,           mystifying as the shadow of amber clouds in the azure lake beside my cottage...          when there is no wrinkle in the tranquil water ~ ripples which scatter shadows as if tiny pieces of shattered glasses~        glowing as the colour of my pulsating, fluttering heart ~ at the delightful thoughts of being with my beloved.             summer is leaving ~  with a saddened heart, my enchanting garden losing its gorgeous lustre, only with the hope of rejuvenation,           hard to believe ~ there were blushing beaming dahlias, magnolias, jinias, not too long ago, envying and competing with each other!           nowhere in sight.           magical rose bush almost abandoned...   one last flower bursting with radiant hues, still smiling a ravishing smile ~          last dance of a ballerina ~ a jubilant performance of a creative soul, before the curtain finally drops and the performer fades away with a departing bow.     reminding the inevitability of separation, decay and death.                     It is alone and lonely... swaying and twirling on a brittle branch which clings to the final witness of the rejoicing,           I see the solitary beauty, bravely waiting to join its clan.....           I will wait to see the resurgence of a new bud ~          I will wait, and not despair.  Reference: Seven-horse Charioteer: In ancient Indian literature, Surya's (Sun's) iconography is often depicted riding a chariot harnessed by horses (Source: Wikipedia) November 30, 2020 The Last 1 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 1/1/2021 4:57:00 PM
Mala, a lovely musing on the last rose of the season and the inevitability of its fall. Much wisdom to apply to our soul as we contemplate nature, beauty, and the cycle of the seasons and a last note of hope. I so enjoyed hearing you recite this beautiful poem, and seeing the wonderful images float by. Thank you for taking the time to put this presentation together; a feast for the heart! Happy new year, dear friend ~ John
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/1/2021 5:14:00 PM
Dear John, I couldn't have uploaded this video without your help. With your detailed instructions, it took a few minutes! I am so delighted to hear that you enjoyed the presentation. Happy New Year, My Friend! Wish you all the best in 2021, and many more years ahead.
Date: 12/7/2020 4:58:00 AM
Your last line conveys deeply how an empowered woman should be. Greatly penned and a pleasure to read Malabika. Goodluck _Amethyst
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Date: 12/9/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet, for your thoughtful comments. Pleasure to meet you ~ Mala
Date: 12/2/2020 11:23:00 AM
Malabika It is a very lovely poem! a lonely rose evokes so many emotions in us!! All the best in the contest!
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Date: 12/2/2020 3:41:00 PM
So true, Krish - so many emotions play in mind looking at a lonely Rose. Thank you so much. Appreciate your uplifting comments.
Date: 11/30/2020 3:32:00 PM
I felt exact the same in my garden... Everything is dying, but it seems like we've had an extended period of blooming .. I still have a couple of roses and Fuschia in bloom... Love the imagery in your poem.
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Date: 11/30/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much. Sounds like we have the same interests - I am in Canada..very cold right now. My greatest joy is writing and painting - in the backyard garden! Appreciate your beautiful comments.

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