Last Night When You Were In Deep Sleep

Last night when you were in deep sleep I scribbled a poem on your bare back, a page so soft--with love bites and moles I used them to cut the t's and dot the i's; my finger tips' softly turn created ripples in a placid lake where you prepared to take a dip in your dream, my words followed you in that unknown land secretly to know your destination. I remembered to forget every scribbled word as it was my gift to the sleepless night, she was picking up each word one by one and kept them in her lap of silence. For the first time,you never knew how a poem was born and lost in the silence of night. © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) =====================================
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Dom Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:20 PM
Superb write! Congratulations!
Hendricks Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:33 AM
Eloquence at its finest, Kash. Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "fave poem" contest. Well done on this well-deserved win, my friend. :)
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 7:39 AM
Dreamy Kash ..congratulations
A   Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Kash, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
Gasun Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Many congrats my dear friend Kash! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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April 19, 2013 at 8:33 PM
Kash, a sweet win~*~SKAT
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 7:52 PM
How in heaven, I ever missed this earlier, I cannot imagine!! Marvelous, dear Kash!!
Mannan Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 10:44 PM
Simply beautiful Kash, many congrats for this win.
Minardi Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:19 PM
I surely remember this one.. Congrats on your win, Kash. A beautiful poem :)
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Kash, I really like this beautiful, romantic poem you have written! Congrats on your HM! Love, Kim
Taylor Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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March 30, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Kash, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:31 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
Merryman Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Kash! Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:32 PM
congrats Kash on another great win for this deeply intense poetry.. well deserved my friendf..luv..
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Congrats, Kash. Great write. Nice going. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:50 AM
Great verse Kash. Congratulations
Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Kash I feel all the tenderness in this! I want to ask you to try something for me? [Of course save this version!] Try writing the same thing without the use of [I] aye? For who else would it be? And present tense..scribbling..send it to me to look at okies? Light and LOve Debi
Guha Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 12:19 AM
Wow! This is Wonderful Kash. Great work. :)
A   Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 12:03 AM
Kash, Congratulations, in Matt's wonderful contest. Have a great one, always & forever PD
Stanley Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 7:36 PM
What a wonderful imagination; a person 'becomes' the poem. Congratulations on your big win, Greg
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Matt's "Anything" contest Kash. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Kash,I see you did REALLy well with this poem and so here is the first one you need to enter in the international contest! You haven't already used it in a past contest,have you. If not, then THIS one for sure. and BIG congrats for you.
Caliri Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:17 PM
Great poem...congrats on 7th place in my "Anything" contest!!!
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