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Last Mirage of Love

Last Mirage of Love

Is a dream afraid of stirring a child left sleeping through the day
never to see the world that’s shinning 
or the fields where they would play.

If I were lost you wouldn’t find me
you wouldn’t think to search the fields
and if I were found 
well then you would lose me
you would be inquiring somewhere else.

Is a smile afraid of giving too many tears left to cry
a fairy tale with no ears to hear its telling 
of all the magic still inside
all the time left waiting for the years it had in store
and all the love left anticipating 
the promise of so much more.

If I were wrecked you wouldn’t find me
you wouldn’t think to explore the meadows
and if I were unearthed well then you would miss me
you would be far too busy 
searching another sea somewhere else

You will never know what is breaking
as these doors  slowly close
so many hours lost in hoping  
have now quietly buried my soul
its a step that’s never taken 
a moment of dawn that never comes
a sleeping dream that never wakens 
to feel the life of the newly rising sun

And if I were here you wouldn’t find me
you would not look for me in the orchards
you wouldn’t think of where I waited
you would search for me no place else
and if I were rescued you would misplace me
you would be out on safari 
looking for my shadow in the fields

My last goodbye wouldn’t linger
my last smile would finish my kiss
you would not her me say how much I loved her
to the sad and burning emptiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/5/2008 3:22:00 PM
sinned. Romans 5:12 If all humans sin,then the logical conclusion is that all souls die. Does a dead soul know or feel anything? God's word says at Ecclesiates 9:5 the living know that they are to die, but the dead no longer know anything. he returneth to his earth, in that very day his thoughts do perish, Psalm 146:4 if the dead no longer know anything and their thoughts perish, how could they sense any torment in hell? i could go on and on just a little information and logical sense process, D
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:17:00 PM
get bread to eat, until you return to the ground, friom which you were taken, for you are dirt, and to dirt you shall return, God's decleration gives no hint that any part of Adam survived his death, When Adam died, Adam the soul died, does any human posess an immortl soul, God told the prophet Ezekiel: the soul who sins is the one who will die Ezekiel 18:4 the apostle Paul wrote, through one person Adam sin entered the world, and through sin, death, and thus death came to all, inasmuch as all
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:13:00 PM
what a sad and beautiful write, filled with love compassion and depth, you are right about one thing, mentioning your comments to Jhon Rhinem, how can I put this, a loving God has not and did not create a place of eternal torment, this is what some teach but it is not the truth, this was created to cause confusion and needless mental anguish, and it also defames God, who is a God of love, what happened to Adam and Eve was not eternal torment in hell. Genesis 3:19 by the sweat of your face you
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Date: 11/4/2008 10:48:00 PM
Colin this is profound. Amazing write of lost love. Very unique analogies. Excellent write. Michael Torres
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