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Tragic story with brilliant images Andrea.. I'm glad you thought my 29 piece was a worthy write hey.. love Wilma

Hi Andrea, you asked me about to what my Senryu "History" was referring. When I wrote that I was actually thinking about archeology...All the best...Love, Gert

Could be a roadside Billboard message. Well written.

painful to read. every day I see people texting, phones propped on the steering wheel. sad.

WOW ... incredible imagery with this one Andrea. Good luck in the contest!!

I can relate to this one because I was once in a serious car accident. Your description is quite graphic. Matthew Anish

Good luck Andrea, in the contest, this is sad and awful. Just the picture of the phone and blood. Her dying to get home, you made it a Tanka, enjoyed,..p.d.

Again a brilliant brief tragic story from your seasoned pen. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your contest. Hope you would find my new series poems Patradoot based on my father's work in Hindi and written by my in English quite interesting. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...... Andrea Dietrich

This reminds of events a few years ago when there was a crash and the fireman who arrived at the crash scene discovered his wife in the crash. Incredibly tragic and sad life can be at times. Heartfelt piece Andrea > good luck in Brian's fine contest >> James

Wow...this tells a tragic story, in so few words! Wonderful take on the contest, Andrea!!

A great tanka on a sad situation. Very real emotion is stirred...good one Andrea...Luv Margaret

Very nice write...I hope it's not from seeing something like this in person. Good luck in the contest. Dan C

oh...such a sad tanka :( so vivid too... it's really heartbreaking when things like this happen...

OMG. How eerie and sad. Well written Tanks, Andrea.

Touching...enjoyed reading this, but with pain...nicely written!

poignant!

thats not a very welcoming sight to find your own spouse in a wreckage. dying to get home, clever, and very sad. good luck. its says it all in just a few syllables. -Always&Forever Lynette

Very emotive write for the contest...Good luck..This is happening often here in America when young people use their phones when they should be paying attention..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Wow this is a nice sad one and should get some attention....enjoyed...good luck in the contest....Marty

Hi Andrea: I hope this is fiction and not fact, anyway it is a well written and thought provoking poem. I hope that your vacation was great. Thanks 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Yours truly: Sheol

This poem is great Andrea... good luck in Brian's new contest... yes Ron proposed but a few months ago before our 3000th fight and then we split...AGAIN... I have the emerald and diamond wedding ring remember? ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Good luck in the contest. Full of suspense

Sad story, Andrea, but well written! Wish you success in the contest and thank your for your comments...All the best...Love, Gert

Good luck love... great entry..

Wow, serious message here Andrea ! We just got the new law here, which we have been back and forth about for the last two years....no more cell phones while driving around here or a heafty fine ! Great write ! james