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Rear View Mirror by Steven Ellingson. Photo stock - Snapwire

pain ... the blood of her pen a harlequin's hope ... the thrum in her breast and being no quarter given the issue of her barren womb she looked back one last time on the darkened house ... things and thoughts and threadbare attentions the labor of her love ... the love of her labor that structure that had meant everything ... now, but a cold castle ... a lifetime of sacrifice and dedication ... and fear perspectives meant for panic placed pointedly at her fair feet with threats and a well-timed backhand (she gently poked the bruise on her cheek ... her reality) children were the bond, the cement, the guarantee but it had been a feigned promise only his intent was ever the opposite she saw that now ... clearly the ruin no longer mattered the lies, the humiliation, the endless attempts to be the 'good wife' at all costs mattered not ... not anymore ... her eyes left the rear-view mirror in a silent pledge never again ... NOW was all she cared about now, and the dream ... of tomorrow. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New 13, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/13/2020 10:08:00 AM
A very stirring and touching write G, reminds me of my when she dreams lyric, well done dear poet!
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:25:00 PM
This brilliant muse sends waves of muddled emotions to my heart. I am glad I can still read your poems Greg! They take me on a journey to the other world. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Gregory on your win!;)
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Date: 7/25/2020 12:56:00 PM
Sometimes looking back can be a blessing, other times a sad curse. Your poem exhibits a reality of looking back and seeing pain and sorrows. A life not appreciated and time that can never be regained. All too real, and all too sad tht such exists too often.. Great poem and a fine fav my friend.. God bless....
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