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Rear View Mirror by Steven Ellingson. Photo stock - Snapwire

pain ...
the blood of her pen
a harlequin's hope ...
the thrum in her breast and being
no quarter given the issue of her barren womb
she looked back one last time
on the darkened house ...
things and thoughts and threadbare attentions
the labor of her love ... the love of her labor
that structure that had meant everything ...
now, but a cold castle ...
a lifetime of sacrifice and dedication ... and fear
perspectives meant for panic
placed pointedly at her fair feet
with threats and a well-timed backhand
(she gently poked the bruise on her cheek ... her reality)
children were the bond, the cement, the guarantee
but it had been a feigned promise only
his intent was ever the opposite
she saw that now ... clearly
the ruin no longer mattered
the lies, the humiliation, the endless attempts
to be the 'good wife' at all costs
mattered not ... not anymore ...
her eyes left the rear-view mirror in a silent pledge
never again ...
NOW was all she cared about
now, and the dream ...
of tomorrow.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Strand Completely New 13, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/13/2020 10:08:00 AM
A very stirring and touching write G, reminds me of my when she dreams lyric, well done dear poet!
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:25:00 PM
This brilliant muse sends waves of muddled emotions to my heart. I am glad I can still read your poems Greg! They take me on a journey to the other world. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Gregory on your win!;)
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Date: 7/25/2020 12:56:00 PM
Sometimes looking back can be a blessing, other times a sad curse. Your poem exhibits a reality of looking back and seeing pain and sorrows. A life not appreciated and time that can never be regained. All too real, and all too sad tht such exists too often.. Great poem and a fine fav my friend.. God bless....
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