Last Lingering Light

A scarlet sun bleeds onto a pink sky, behind branches of a majestic oak. And shadows ink its leaves in silhouette, as lonely crickets chirp and bullfrogs croak. I hear the treetops swaying in the breeze; and a brook, babbling with a southern drawl. But they're lost to the quiet of the night; as time slows to a perceptible crawl. When adventurous moths take to the air, acrobatic bats hunt them down mid-flight. And as darkness descends like a curtain, twilight acquiesces to the night's might. A quicksilver moon pools amidst the clouds; dripping drops of sunlight onto the lake. And all the heavens begin to glitter; as billions of sleeping stars seem to wake. A lone owl's haunting hoot empowers dusk to extinguish the last lingering light. And diurnal animals go to sleep; while Nature silently whispers goodnight.

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Date: 3/8/2018 10:00:00 AM
Love the whimsical "acroBATic BATs" too funny! Love your delightful last line "as nature silently whispers Goodnight". Beautiful, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/11/2015 11:49:00 PM
Brilliant poetry, Emile! Just loved all of your creative descriptions here! I especially got a comical kick out of the phrase "a brook babbling with a southern drawl"!! A huge enthusiastic 7 and a fave and congrats:)
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Date: 8/12/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, your friendly comments and support is very much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/5/2015 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations Emile: Loved the imagery you have penned. A delight for the senses, SuZ
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Suzanne, I appreciate both your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 8/5/2015 8:50:00 AM
"A quicksilver moon pools amidst the clouds, dripping drops of sunshine onto the lake." Love the juxtaposition of the idea of sunshine at night. Great poem, Emile!
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate both your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 8/5/2015 8:50:00 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 8/5/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate you comments and support. Emile.
Date: 8/4/2015 10:26:00 PM
Beauty of nature so well penned Emile ! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/4/2015 9:42:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Date: 8/4/2015 9:05:00 PM
Nice rhyme and you worked all of the phrases in very smoothly. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Joyce, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/4/2015 5:20:00 PM
superb Emile congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, I appreciate your support, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.
Date: 8/4/2015 4:14:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery - I can see why Shadow placed this so highly many congrats Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:01:00 PM
YOU ARE AMAZING! You are such an inspiration to me! Every line is so unique, beautiful, clever and well thought through! I am envious that I, myself, did not write this poem! A 7! Wow!
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Date: 8/2/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Anna, you are very gracious with your time and compliments, I appreciate both..Emile.
Date: 8/1/2015 3:09:00 PM
Excellent beauty is hidden in the natural picture you have drawn with natural colorful words. 7 i feel. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 8/1/2015 3:57:00 PM
Thanks BL, I appreciate you kind comments and support. Emile.
Date: 8/1/2015 12:31:00 PM
tender is your night weaving words into delightful refrains, emile..huggs
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Date: 8/1/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate you kind comments and support. Emile.
Date: 8/1/2015 9:16:00 AM
So pretty Emile ! I love the " I can hear the rippeling crops" that was a great way to use that. The last two lines are just beautiful! ~lee
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Date: 8/1/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Lee, I appreciate you kind comments and support. Emile.
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