Last Lingering Light

A scarlet sun bleeds onto a pink sky, behind branches of a majestic oak. And shadows ink its leaves in silhouette, as lonely crickets chirp; and bullfrogs croak. I hear the treetops swaying in the breeze; and a brook, babbling, with a southern drawl. But they're lost to the quiet of the night; as time slows to a perceptible crawl. When adventurous moths take to the air, acrobatic bats hunt them down mid-flight. And as darkness descends like a curtain, twilight acquiesces to the night's might. A quicksilver moon pools amidst the clouds; dripping drops of sunlight onto the lake. And all the cosmos begins to glitter; as billions of sleeping stars slowly wake. A lone owl's haunting hoot empowers dusk, to extinguish the last lingering light. And diurnal animals go to sleep, as Nature silently whispers goodnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Love the whimsical "acroBATic BATs" too funny! Love your delightful last line "as nature silently whispers Goodnight". Beautiful, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Thanks so much Line, your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. Emile.
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Brilliant poetry, Emile! Just loved all of your creative descriptions here! I especially got a comical kick out of the phrase "a brook babbling with a southern drawl"!! A huge enthusiastic 7 and a fave and congrats:)
Pinet Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Thanks so much Laura, your friendly comments and support is very much appreciated. Emile.
Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Congratulations Emile: Loved the imagery you have penned. A delight for the senses, SuZ
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:41 AM
Thanks so much Suzanne, I appreciate both your comments and support. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate you comments and support. Emile.
Inman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:50 AM
"A quicksilver moon pools amidst the clouds, dripping drops of sunshine onto the lake." Love the juxtaposition of the idea of sunshine at night. Great poem, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate both your comments and support. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Beauty of nature so well penned Emile ! Congrats on first place win!
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your support. Emile.
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Nice rhyme and you worked all of the phrases in very smoothly. Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Joyce, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 5:20 PM
superb Emile congrats on 1st place hugs
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Shadow, I appreciate your support, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Such wonderful imagery - I can see why Shadow placed this so highly many congrats Emile:-) hugs jan xx
Hopper Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:01 PM
YOU ARE AMAZING! You are such an inspiration to me! Every line is so unique, beautiful, clever and well thought through! I am envious that I, myself, did not write this poem! A 7! Wow!
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Anna, you are very gracious with your time and compliments, I appreciate both..Emile.
Devnath  Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Excellent beauty is hidden in the natural picture you have drawn with natural colorful words. 7 i feel. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Thanks BL, I appreciate you kind comments and support. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 12:31 PM
tender is your night weaving words into delightful refrains, emile..huggs
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate you kind comments and support. Emile.
Carter Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 9:16 AM
So pretty Emile ! I love the " I can hear the rippeling crops" that was a great way to use that. The last two lines are just beautiful! ~lee
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Thanks Lee, I appreciate you kind comments and support. Emile.
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