Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Last Line Prompt - Not For Contest

We met on a blind date oh so many years ago
You wanted to get to know me I said lets take it slow
But one thing lead to another and we enjoyed a night of sin
We ended up making love all the night ...
instead of drinking coffee in the cafés of Berlin

10th January 2016

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Archana Garg January 27, 2016 at 7:20 AM Aha! A very light-hearted poem.. Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:46 PM Thanks Archana:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry January 11, 2016 at 10:19 PM Your humor is delightful! love it! Jan Allison January 12, 2016 at 1:02 PM I do try and write with humour although not everyone appreciates my form of wit:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie January 11, 2016 at 12:30 AM So how did you get the grin off your face Jan or are you still wearing it - perhaps you had strong coffee with no sugar in the morning - thanks Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison January 11, 2016 at 1:47 AM lol wish it was true Lindsay and I rarely drink coffee prefer tea lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France January 10, 2016 at 1:12 PM Jan, oh bad girl, but oh so romantic, a sensual night of love in Berlin, lovely, wonderful, I love this 7 ~ Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 1:14 PM Me bad Broken Wings lol noooooooooooooooo I was inspired by the prompt :-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser January 10, 2016 at 11:18 AM This is a wish I was there moment. Five lines that say so much, love it Jan ~~ hugs ~~ James xx Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM aww you make me smile James:-) hugs Jan xx

Legendary Legend January 10, 2016 at 8:28 AM great write Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM Thanks Legend:-) hugs jan xx

Wilfred Aniagyei January 10, 2016 at 3:04 AM Looool!!!! Last line, indeed.... Brings the fun of the pen... Well done, Jan Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 6:58 AM I do try and have fun when I write Wilfred:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez January 10, 2016 at 2:14 AM Oh you be silly...lol! Thanks for da laffs! Your nutty muse is back! hugs Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 6:58 AM I can't enter the contest but there is no harm in being inspired by the prompt:-) hugs jan xx

White Sage January 10, 2016 at 2:06 AM oh the coffee will miss a guest lol, nice fictional write there Jan, its lovely Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 6:59 AM ha ha ha Sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere January 10, 2016 at 12:13 AM oh la la you make me rire with this, fantastique Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 6:59 AM Thanks Etienne just a fun write inspired by the prompt:-) hugs jan xx

Howard Tunick January 9, 2016 at 8:49 PM Reality doesn't count... great story... nice poem.4 Jan Allison January 9, 2016 at 9:05 PM Thanks Howard I never look at the ratings anyway lol:-) the most important thing for me is for my poems to get read:-) hugs Jan xx Howard Tunick January 9, 2016 at 8:51 PM I have no idea how that 4 got there. Please don't take it as any kind of rating! I do not rate. Just enjoy and I enjoyed this one.

Mark Woods January 9, 2016 at 7:47 PM Haha. Wow what could be a better place than Oktoberfest for a blind date!! lol Jan Allison January 9, 2016 at 7:55 PM lol Just a fun write Mark I was inspired by the contest prompt :-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein January 9, 2016 at 7:44 PM Lol , great story in there , it's true love , beautiful poem my dear, hugs / / :) dalia Jan Allison January 9, 2016 at 7:45 PM pure fiction write just a bit of fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso January 9, 2016 at 7:36 PM LOL great poem, loved the last line! Jan Allison January 9, 2016 at 7:39 PM ha ha ha that comment made me LOL:-) hugs jan xx