Last Leaf

Nice imagery Valsa, Very nicely penned Valsa

Great image, Valsa . Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Great job, Valsa. Congrats

Nicely done. Congratulations on your win. —MDJ

Valsa, your beautiful Haika says so many things! I love it.

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!

"doggedly" - Beautiful. Comparison too is great, "as dying man's breath". Congratulations!

As i look out of my window, i see one on my apple tree, Looking at it so differently now. Thank you. Harry

Dear Valsa, yes, you vividly capture the last leaf's desperate cling so masterfully.. as each moment passes its grip slips from the present to the past.. and such a great last line for a grand finale to an awesome haiku! Your poetic gift shines! Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

A scene I've observed for myself. Well written and clear Haiku, Valsa. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Ouch. ~ Alive and Well

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this entry and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Moment wonderfully caught, Valsa. The picture that you painted provides a fantastic picture of the splendor that is seen in nature! And it sums up how I've been feeling over the past several days.

Well caught and connected! Enjoyed!

We need to think a lot about this haiku.

Moment well captured, Valsa--the image you convey --beauty of nature!

Love the image Valsa, have seen that lone leaf many times and notice when it finally comes down. Back from Spain now but heading off again next week to Wales. Hope you're keeping well. Tom