Last Kiss

Open your eyes to the ever turning skies 
I want to here with me through the night 
My heart yearns into your soul 
Burning as if newly lit coal 
I bravely submerg the embers 
That the time I have can be spent with you 
And I remember each kiss every moment 
I was caught in your love that for just this day I remember 
So what happened was a chance for your love 
A time that I kept in a locket tied with a kiss 
 I wanted you to feel, to love, to slumber 
And to awake in my arms with that times kept bliss 
I lay silient in an umber

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/21/2015 9:35:00 AM
I love this poem, Ruth...lovely, sad and romantic all in one. I can picture it in my mind. // paul
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:13:00 PM
You must be a good visionary thanks again Paul
Date: 10/15/2013 11:44:00 AM
I usely read assuming a basic criticism and I prefer to express any observation about poems, including mine. This one is sincerely nice and well written. Your love is perceived through the verses and recalls sweet moments of anybody's life
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:15:00 PM
thank you Mario I read some of your poems the other night and I enjoyed them very much
Date: 10/15/2013 8:50:00 AM
My Kingdom for that certain person's kiss That ran this race of life with me And turned my fears to bliss
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:16:00 PM
well said Micheal, I flipped through your poems and thought they were all great Happy fall to you
Date: 10/15/2013 2:21:00 AM
So sweet and passionate write my dear friend, Ruth. A great verse indeed! I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem of yours and for stopping by as well. I'm glad you appreciated the humble style of my writings. Big hugs to you! Have a wonderful day! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:17:00 PM
thank you Lenora I enjoyed writting this poem very much
Date: 10/14/2013 11:58:00 PM
Drake is right. An intense poem. Love that word "umber"
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:17:00 PM
I wasn't sure if umber was a word my English is slow. Typo corrected
Date: 10/14/2013 10:09:00 AM
Those last few lines really did me in. You created some strong intensity in this writing.
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:18:00 PM
I read you Writers Block poem and thought it was very amusing thanks for the inspirations Drake
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