Last Kiss

Open your eyes to the ever turning skies I want to here with me through the night My heart yearns into your soul Burning as if newly lit coal I bravely submerg the embers That the time I have can be spent with you And I remember each kiss every moment I was caught in your love that for just this day I remember So what happened was a chance for your love A time that I kept in a locket tied with a kiss I wanted you to feel, to love, to slumber And to awake in my arms with that times kept bliss I lay silient in an umber

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2015 9:35:00 AM

I love this poem, Ruth...lovely, sad and romantic all in one. I can picture it in my mind. // paul

Courtney Courtney
Date: 1/21/2015 2:13:00 PM

You must be a good visionary thanks again Paul

Mario DE PAZ

Date: 10/15/2013 11:44:00 AM

I usely read assuming a basic criticism and I prefer to express any observation about poems, including mine. This one is sincerely nice and well written. Your love is perceived through the verses and recalls sweet moments of anybody's life

Courtney Courtney
Date: 10/16/2013 12:15:00 PM

thank you Mario I read some of your poems the other night and I enjoyed them very much

Michael Ainsley

Date: 10/15/2013 8:50:00 AM

My Kingdom for that certain person's kiss That ran this race of life with me And turned my fears to bliss

Courtney Courtney
Date: 10/16/2013 12:16:00 PM

well said Micheal, I flipped through your poems and thought they were all great Happy fall to you

Len Gasun

Date: 10/15/2013 2:21:00 AM

So sweet and passionate write my dear friend, Ruth. A great verse indeed! I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem of yours and for stopping by as well. I'm glad you appreciated the humble style of my writings. Big hugs to you! Have a wonderful day! love lots, Leonora

Courtney Courtney
Date: 10/16/2013 12:17:00 PM

thank you Lenora I enjoyed writting this poem very much

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2013 11:58:00 PM

Drake is right. An intense poem. Love that word "umber"

Courtney Courtney
Date: 10/16/2013 12:17:00 PM

I wasn't sure if umber was a word my English is slow. Typo corrected

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/14/2013 10:09:00 AM

Those last few lines really did me in. You created some strong intensity in this writing.

Courtney Courtney
Date: 10/16/2013 12:18:00 PM

I read you Writers Block poem and thought it was very amusing thanks for the inspirations Drake