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8/30/2024 for Than-Bauk Variation Poetry Contest sponsored by Kim Rodriguez

a plea to hear a pale hand's reach a heart's last hope

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Date: 9/22/2024 11:59:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congrats on first place
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David Crandall
Date: 9/22/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 9/20/2024 2:51:00 PM
Evokes so many images, David. Thoroughly enjoyed your winning entry. Congrats. Terry
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David Crandall
Date: 9/20/2024 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Terry! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 9/19/2024 2:12:00 PM
This is so emotive and deeply touching dear david! Felt the emotions flowing throughout this in just few syllables! Very well delivered! Pleasure reading this!! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Sending you light always
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David Crandall
Date: 9/19/2024 8:25:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Ink Empress!
Date: 9/18/2024 7:34:00 AM
David, CONGRATS on your win with this expressive, moving poem. Yes, there are so many people who just need a little kindness! Janice
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David Crandall
Date: 9/18/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your kind words!
Date: 9/17/2024 9:54:00 PM
congratulations dear poet.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/18/2024 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
Date: 9/17/2024 6:57:00 PM
David, this is so meaningful ... so emotive. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/17/2024 5:44:00 PM
Wonderful! Congratulations, David!
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David Crandall
Date: 9/17/2024 6:00:00 PM
Wow - thank you Kim!
Date: 8/30/2024 5:55:00 PM
This poem evokes powerful imagery and emotion!
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David Crandall
Date: 9/1/2024 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Wendy!

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