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Some say when you reach that higher plane you have more, not less to gain others counter and explain that it's over, no gain to claim Mystery started way back when in a garden called Eden an error we have paid for since becoming a bane of our existence So we live to the fullest, and obtain grace but the reaper has the last embrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/30/2012 7:55:00 AM
A deep write to be sure; fascinating array of thought that wraps up beautifully in that last line. Great one! Luv, Lizabeth
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Joseph May
Date: 5/3/2012 1:29:00 PM
Thank you for those kind words Liz
Date: 4/24/2012 10:21:00 AM
Awesome ending! I like how you led up to it and it's so true. I don't know about higher planes, but we definitely end up in his embrace. good title for this too :)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/3/2012 1:28:00 PM
thank you Susan, I appreciate your comments
Date: 4/20/2012 11:27:00 AM
This is very nice Joseph.Enjoyed it.Thanks for reading my poem.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/3/2012 1:27:00 PM
thanks Kash, I appreciate your input
Date: 4/20/2012 11:23:00 AM
A pleasure stopping by to see your work..Love it!! so true!!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/3/2012 1:26:00 PM
I appreciate you stopping by and commenting G

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