Last Dance

Let us dance in the old fashioned way
bodies entwined, nothing much to say.
Two people in love just shuffling along,
to some old romantic, favourite song.

Oblivious to all, just us in the place,
you, me, the music, a smile on our face.
Peeling back the years as we cover the floor,
back to those heady, courtship days of yore.

When two hearts sparked and magic was born,
and now here we are, a little shop-soiled and worn.
Older and wiser, in the twilight of our years,
counting our blessings, the laughter, the tears.

Our bodies stiffer, our rhythm slowing,
our passion undiminished, our love still growing.
All the time hoping, praying for the chance,
for one more romantic, and slow, last dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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James Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Very beautiful and romantic, such a deep love and special bond felt. Well written and imagery, like this a lot, Emilia : ) xx
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Thanks Emilia, I like your comments a lot x
Turner Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 8:10 PM
It is obvious this is written from the heart to someone very special. A heartwarming write, John.
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Thanks Daniel I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Grimm Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 6:02 PM
ellegant and smooth, nice David
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Cheers David always grateful for your feedback
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