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Last Call For Lonely Hearts

Gently the lights did fade As soft the music played Romantic songs leading the charts Meant to tend to broken hearts Lonely souls dreamily swaying In their silence desperately praying Thru the night the band played on Till wee hours before dawn AP: Honorable Mention 2020 submitted on June 11, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S SELECT C sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST originally posted on October 25, 2019

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Morgana Moon

Date: 6/11/2020 8:15:00 PM

Your words transported me to the most beautiful ballroom!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/11/2020 10:26:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely compliment, Morgana.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/26/2019 8:55:00 PM

Just great, Line. Can envision it exactly as you've written it. Just in case this resonates: So reminiscent of the dance scenes at the end of Jurgis and Ona's wedding in Upton Sinclair's novel, 'The Jungle.' (end of Chapter One). Smiles, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/26/2019 9:38:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely visit and compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/25/2019 1:29:00 AM

Hopefully by the end of the night some will have found love. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Tom.