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Last Breath

last breath thanking the plants and animals that have sustained me my ancestors I honor and the spirit enfolding me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/30/2015 8:37:00 AM
The words and the context! Really beautiful, yet so sad.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:00:00 AM
deep...~7~
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Date: 10/10/2015 12:57:00 PM
A very good tanka Thomas, I agree with my sister, this is deep and one of the best tanka I've read on the soup. A 7 & fav. SKAT
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Thomas Martin
Date: 10/11/2015 4:38:00 PM
thank you so much! are you real sisters!
Date: 10/10/2015 12:51:00 PM
I like this very much Thomas, A fav.... LINDA
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Thomas Martin
Date: 10/11/2015 4:39:00 PM
glad you liked it! always enjoy reading your stuff!!

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