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Last Blow First Breath

Dying is the last blow, but in fact it's the first breath of other life... !

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Date: 10/23/2022 4:24:00 AM
It is the first breath of our "real life" this is all pretend.
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Date: 10/21/2022 7:58:00 PM
Deep truth
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 10/22/2022 5:05:00 AM
tHANK YOU DEAR Seeker, salute alkas
Date: 10/21/2022 8:45:00 AM
yes ~ I totally believe it ~
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 10/22/2022 5:05:00 AM
Cheers to YOU DEAR Line, tHANK YOU, salute alkas

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