Last and Lonely

My heart is beating very  fast.
Will I be she who’s chosen last?
I hear my name and join the three
Who have been favored over me.

I watch those standing yet in line,
And see their fear as strong as mine.
Their fate unknown, they mutely stand,
And pray to join our little band.

At last one girl stands there alone,
Her face is flushed, her chances blown.
As telling tears she strives to hide,
I know full well she would have died,

Rather than left abandoned there,
To bear the scorn and pitying stare.
I know  the shame, I’ve filled her shoes,					
The girl that neither side would chose. 


Entered for John Heck's contest   "Blink"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/15/2020 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win :)
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:49:00 AM
Very creative and nice entry to the contest, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:20:00 PM
Hey, at first I thought this was for the "line" poem contest bcause you were standing in a line and then I saw for "blink" well, it could work in either!! It's wonderful. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/21/2010 8:50:00 PM
I also know the pain of not being chosen..until I got to highschool I wasn't very popular with my horn-rimmed glasses and corrective shoes!Then in Highschool I discovered writing, drama and music and found many like-minded friends.Sometimes I really would get chosen then!..Good luck in the contest Joyce..good job Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:58:00 PM
There was always a stigma attached to being the last one chosen for a team in school. Indeed, this describes a very lonely feeling, Joyce. Very touching poem. I think John will love it too. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:39:00 PM
How sad it is to think of those who were always chosen last, Joyce. I'm "blinking" back the tears now. Good luck in John's contest. Diane
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