Las Vegas Devil

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October 1st a sad day in Las Vegas.

LAS VEGAS DEVIL losing grip of sanity finger vice-like triggers gun - death descends on crowd 10/2/2017 Senryu

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John Michaels

Date: 10/7/2017 6:15:00 AM

Nicely-expressed Senyru, Kim. Such a tragic incident :( Regards, John.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/3/2017 9:11:00 AM

What happened in Vegas was sad and horrific.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/3/2017 7:01:00 AM

Sad as sad can be--well depicted!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/2/2017 10:46:00 PM

Such a tragedy, nice Senryu, I grieve for all the senseless loss.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2017 7:49:00 PM

my heart is so heavy seeing the news Kim:-( hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2017 7:51:00 PM

Me too... my cousin and family would likely have been in that crowd but for a family wedding. Sending them a ton of kisses. Hold our families tight. Hug, sweet Jan!