Large White

Common as cabbage, a daily sight- a butterfly ballet in flight

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Frances King

Date: 8/5/2009 5:09:00 AM

A beautiful but much-maligned butterfly - the caterpillars don't eat all the cabbages! Thank you for the mention in the Caricare contest. It was fun!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/3/2009 9:44:00 PM

sounds like the Mayfly Hatch in Northern Mn. on our lakes! good fishin!!! jimbo

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/3/2009 8:49:00 PM

Your words are as beautiful as the butterfly in flight, ever so gracefully soaring through the air. This is lovely!

P Sheart

Date: 8/3/2009 3:54:00 PM

Hi Brian Love the last two lines! I pause to enjoy this scenic wonder! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

John Freeman

Date: 8/3/2009 2:01:00 PM

A master's art work, hu Brian? Good work, Moses

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/3/2009 12:53:00 PM

I received the book in the mail today Brian..awesome..thanks brother.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/3/2009 11:01:00 AM

Brian my friend how are you today - loved this witty ditty bro - Butterflies are quite beautiful in flight - ZGod Bless, MJ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2009 10:17:00 AM

Love this one. Keep writing. Sara

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/3/2009 10:16:00 AM

Wonderful writing again Brian..enjoyed.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/3/2009 9:40:00 AM

Brian,...very very beautiful poetry !! TY for brightening mine day !!!! james

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/3/2009 9:16:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful.......this poem!! :) Brought a smile this morning!