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lanternes I'm not happy with

ahhh keep me held within your loving arms stay tick tick tock time ticks on so march with time stop whirls whips swirls confusion the entangled thoughts still settle influence never the same lost dreams straddle waking thoughts half conscious state lures fish like bait in theory but they regret it traps ensnare an essence which is then lost snap gold is not silvery if you ask me thanks moons mentos and pearls too are different things blue iris black lashes zero clashes see pens make scrawls scratch it down remember these words leaf through days discover self through the haze there

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Date: 11/17/2023 8:14:00 PM
'traps ensnare...,' a beauty
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Date: 11/17/2023 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, I almost wanted more words for that one. Things of beauty trapped lose something magical the minute they are ensnared. Thank you for your kind comment, appreciated
Date: 11/17/2023 11:40:00 AM
WOW!! You took your creative write to another world. Love It. Good Luck.... I also did is one, just one. Have a wonderful day...........
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Date: 11/17/2023 11:57:00 AM
Thank you x I did one I entered and about three pages of rejects haha :)
Date: 11/17/2023 11:14:00 AM
Haha silver one and moon one made me smile, these are fun, so creative. I love them
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Date: 11/17/2023 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Ink, I may be running out of ideas at this stage :)

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