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Languishing No More

Struggling over guilt-inflicted angst persistent along spontaneous languishing tangible through prevailing vexatious misery… …my destitute soul, in carnality’s chain succumbed to materialism’s glittering offer defying fervent commitment to patronize pursuits of eternal worth… Bewildered midst lurking skepticism upon doubts of intrigue lure… my mind besought for marvelous revelation from truth’s divine portal to grip my perspective and navigate my heart earnestly exposing its fixation to virtuous ascent in the guise of sacrifice, yet when gauged according to hallowed righteousness was vainly ephemeral. Woe was I… beguiled, wavering in my faith bewitched by fleshly desires bound to perilous defeat... ---yet God, graciously rich in compassion* reached out to me along His wondrous pardon… …Now, my spirit that ceaselessly yields to Him with earnest repentance enjoys His serene revival, propelling triumphant grateful worship enabled toward blissful stewardship service --- --- languishing never!
*Psalm 145:8 The LORD is gracious, and full of compassion; slow to anger, and of great mercy. January 30, 2020 2nd place, "Eight word challenge 1 2020" Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton; judged on 1/31/2020.

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Date: 2/1/2020 3:33:00 PM
Serving the Lord with your words! Congrats, Beata!
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Date: 1/31/2020 2:42:00 PM
Beata congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Beata on an amazing write, so many expressions of pure poetry at the highest level, congrats on a great win!
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Date: 1/29/2020 5:59:00 AM
Such a lovely piece Beata, full of great imagery, rhyme and expression. God bless, Gordon
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