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Labyinthine, Languish, Letter Word Contest ~ November 7, 2023

Sponsored by Constance La France

painting by Judy Mackey

“Every wall that would entrap me has a door that would free me. And I languish because the fear of freedom often leaves me preferring the familiarity of the wall.” Craig D. Lounsbrough
I'm languishing in self-pity My cat is lost in the city Grieving for my itty bitty Missing kitty Missing kitty Again, I find myself alone Nobody calls me on the phone Weeping for loved ones I have known Fate, I bemoan Fate, I bemoan A poet languishes each time He seems to be bereft of rhyme Unable to write poems, sublime It is a crime It is a crime Artists languish in mortal fear that their paintings will bring a tear Like Van Gogh who lobbed off an ear End of career End of career Who has not languished in despair pining over things hard to bear Anguish reveals how much we care Heartache beware Heartache beware

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Date: 11/10/2023 12:36:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this one again. Creative write/picture. Have a great day............
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Date: 11/9/2023 8:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win...a wonderful poem, Lin :) - I'm bad at rhyming in English :) - hugs
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Date: 11/9/2023 9:01:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I couldn't begin to write in Norwegian, so you're much braver than I am to try rhyming in English. I admire your writing. Thank you. ~ hugs
Date: 11/8/2023 8:05:00 AM
Excellent Monorhyme, Lin. I especially like the way you used a repeat phrase at the end of each verse. Great entry for the contest. You shouldn't need luck, so I'll just say I hope it gets the acknowledgement it deserves. A poet friend in Texas, Bill P.S. at my age not getting a call is the norm. lol Hugs, Bill P.S.S. Forgot to mention I added this one to my FAVs list. :-)
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Date: 11/8/2023 6:07:00 PM
What wonderful comments and compliments you’ve bestowed on these lines. Thank you very much, Bill. And for faving it, too.
Date: 11/8/2023 5:22:00 AM
Lovely write, Lin. Especially that second very relatable verse. BOL in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:23:00 AM
Hi Charlie and thanks for the well wishes and supportive comments. Hugs to you, too.
Date: 11/7/2023 7:21:00 PM
languishing in a prison of words, broken sentences, disrupted thoughts and unfinished poems. I really like this poem Lin. Very relatable. Excellent penning!
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:22:00 AM
I think you're languishing days are near their end, Danny. Thanks for commenting... Ear scratches for Buddy.
Date: 11/7/2023 5:06:00 PM
Can relate big time to losing my muse and unable to even write a simple limerick, I do love the form you chose Lin, you really are so versatile in whatever style or form you chose:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:21:00 AM
Jan, you've certainly not had to deal with a missing muse since your return to the kitchen. I'm so glad you're here and thank you for being so complimentary of my poetry. Hugs.
Date: 11/7/2023 3:47:00 PM
I agree, Lin. We all languish with anguish at times. I appreciate the lines about poets and of Van Gogh. The way you ended each verse gave such an impact to your words. Well done! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:20:00 AM
Three times for emphasis, says the Bible. Thanks a bunch, Sara.
Date: 11/7/2023 2:56:00 PM
Very nice poem and form! Have a very nice time. Good luck.
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thanks for leaving me your kind thoughts, ~AA.
Date: 11/7/2023 12:52:00 PM
I see you chose the Languish side of the contest Lin, good choice too, especially stanza 3 it’s very befitting of me; anyway anguish reveals how much we care, doesn’t it just, another fine poem from you in one of your specialist forms, cheers David
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:09:00 PM
You can write, David. About anything, any time and it will hold my attention… even if sometimes I have to dig the find the root of your thought or a hidden acorn.
Date: 11/7/2023 12:05:00 PM
A very creative Monorhyme write/fun picture. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day.........
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:06:00 PM
Dear Paula, I enjoy reading all of your kind reviews.
Date: 11/7/2023 11:25:00 AM
Nice poem, Lin. I hope writing a poem without rhyme is not a crime. Lol.
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:05:00 PM
Lol lol Jay. If it is I’ll have to pardon myself. Loved your humor.
Date: 11/7/2023 10:17:00 AM
So many poetic forms I'm unfamiliar with Lin, but I like the repetition; and you've written it well. Thanks
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Date: 11/7/2023 10:48:00 AM
I like this one, too. Jeff. The repetition gives significance and emphasis to the overall meaning. Thanks!
Date: 11/7/2023 9:34:00 AM
Lin, you've so interestingly penned a very relatable poem! I love your Monorhyme and technique for this unique expression! Excellent! Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Date: 11/7/2023 10:47:00 AM
Your comments are always so encouraging and supportive, Mike. I thank you for the many wonderful remarks you've left.
Date: 11/7/2023 8:30:00 AM
Sometimes in life we hit a downward spiral and often can't see a way out, we must never give up on hope because the gray clouds will disperse eventually. I love the repeating lines, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 11/7/2023 9:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom. The form is called Monotetra and I’ve used it several times.

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