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Landscape Majestic Beauty

the magic throne where I stand shows me a fantastic view where I am so mesmerized a nature so bright on wide plains and mountain sides are trees raising up their hands thanking God in abundance with fruits they all have clouds on top of those mountains sun peeks and smiles in its glee reaching out those gliding birds with its radiant rays rice fields with their golden grains sway like wands in fairy tales dragonflies and more insects over the green fields flowers bloom along the path caressed by morning dew drops spread their colorful petals give smiles with the sun on nearby are springs and ponds where lovely swans rest a while both fish and frogs swim and jump joy for everyone
Dec. 8, 2012 Leonora Galinta For Poet Russell Sivey ‘s contest with the theme, Natural Dodoitsu First Place Contest: Natural Dodoitsu Judged: 1/4/2013 Sponsor: Poet Russell Sivey
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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 9:13 PM
good to see this one again on the winners list this time!! Congrats, sweet friend!!
A  Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 12:11 PM
A sweet win Leonora, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:59 PM
LEONORA... MY DEAREST SIS.... PASSING BY SOME OLD CONTEST.... CONGRATS IN THE CONTEST...PD
Liwayway Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Congrats on your win dear Leonora :) a grand winner indeed! love, Mary
Poet Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 11:33 PM
Very nice imagery here Leonora!Congrats on the win.
Roberts Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 10:12 PM
We Ldone my friend Leonora ......Seren
Roberts Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Oops too early in the morning, a typo well*. ......
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Pretty pictures formed by your words. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Congrats on your winning ..Sara
Arowolo Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 4:04 PM
Beautiful piece,Nice presentation...Congrats dear Leonora for this superb win in this contest...Kudos to you...
Guzzi Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 2:54 PM
I loved them all 4 is very unique! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Haick Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Congrats on your fantastic win, Leonora! Love, Annalise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations Leonora love on your winning top spot xx
Maverick Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 2:51 AM
A majestic and serene piece from you Here Leonora; "very beautiful"
Magnet Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Like the offering, imagery thats fits well in the pleasant ad ideallic zones.
Veetil Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 2:16 AM
a bunch of mesmerizing dodoitsu, great...good luck for the contest, love Mehnaz
Horsman Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 2:33 PM
very first wow, and you write six of them, all excellent examples, good luck with these wonders...
Gupta Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:22 PM
it was perfect as my dreams.....i see at my native..............
Carrillo Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:06 AM
This sure is beautiful. A landscape mejestic beauty. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
Williams Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Leonora this may well be your first one but boy did you throw everything at it, very visual indeed, well done my friend...David
Sweetheart Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:22 AM
Leonora this write is majestic beauty with vivid imagery to enhance the mind and heart .. thankxx so much for my first place win in Waking Up .. am so honored and blessed dear friend to be recognized among so many amazing talented poets luv .. please keep my Aunt in prayer ..she had a massive stroke on Monday and is paralyzed on left side .. my husband and I r driving to PA. tomorrow to be with my sweet Uncle who is so upset .. thankxx
Gasun Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful and very inspiring comments on my first experienced form my dear friend, Linda-M and everyone here! Well, rest assured that I'll always include your aunt in my prayer and your whole family as well. Have a safe trip to PA and God speed! love, Leonora
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Very descriptive work..Reads like a winner in Russell's contest..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Hey, Leonora, what's happening?? are you super busy at the school? It's always so nice to see you at my poems. Luv, Andrea
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:15 PM
Hi, Andrea and to all of your here! Thank you so much for the warm wishes, thoughts and inspiring comments. Yes, Andrea. Got so busy in school before this coming final exam. Aside, I also spent more time going out with my friends here these past few days (that was of course after my recovery from flu, lol. ). Again, thank you so much. love you and miss you all!
A   Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Hi Leo, stopping by to say, and see how you are doing.. hope you are not feeling sick any more.. about your poem: love the joy, and jumping ending image... your poem blooms like no other. The majestic imagery makes me want to be right smack in the middle.. LOL..even if I find myself around frogs...Love the poem sis... golden like the rice, and fruit from God's will... always~PD
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:18 PM
Hi, my dear sisie-pooh! Thank you so much for stopping by and the warm thoughts and very inspiring comments on my poem. No, I am not sick any more. Thanks God. I just got busy at work and these past few days (after the flu) went out with my friends here and spent more time with them. miss and love you all! Million thanks again!
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:52 PM
gosh, you really went all out, leonora with these little gems here. I just know Russell will be so pleased. Hope you are having a great day. Luv, Andrea
Palmer Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 9:05 AM
great write Leonora,#1
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