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Land-Ocean Haiku

give me land that’s dry away from the crashing waves hydrophobia behold the marvels of the oceans of the earth teeming with sea life we need the water. we have to live on the land there’s a compromise.
Robert Pettit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/5/2012 5:15:00 AM
Robert, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win in this contest.....spandan
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Robert! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:51:00 AM
congrats on your win Robert, interesting perspective in your haiku
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:13:00 AM
Robert congrats on your win, ..David
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:47:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved and enjoyed, bl
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Date: 1/30/2012 4:06:00 PM
I see only three of us on the winners' list did land/ocean. WAy to Go, Robert. And I'm glad you did land/ocean. very true final haiku!!
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:36:00 PM
congrats Robert on success in my contest.. an excellent entry for my theme choices luv,.. thankxxx..
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Date: 1/20/2012 7:01:00 PM
Wonderful blend of ying yang here, Robert. Linda -Marie will really appreciate the time you took with this entry. Yes,..it's all about compromise. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/20/2012 6:23:00 AM
enjoyed....I love the ocean and swimming....only can't stay in all day or I turn into a wrinkle and the sun burn is blisters.....;-[ <<'))___))>><<
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Date: 1/19/2012 2:38:00 PM
Great observation, the compromise! I'm glad to see you write some Haiku! You did a nice job! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:22:00 AM
Nicely done...
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Date: 1/19/2012 12:30:00 AM
Good one Robert.Linda will like it.Best wishes.
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