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Lament Not

Lament not, oh worthy lama
This life is but a dream
Live in joy, free from fear stigma 
Things are not what they seem

Childlike, given to play
To rhythm divine sway
Keeping ego at bay

Be self-taught
Lament not

13-December-2021
Quietus 

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Susan Ashley December 15, 2021 at 12:07 PM Your poem is truly breathtaking, Seeker, and showcased beautifully in your poetry form. Simply divine in every way. Congratulations for your poem being honored with POTD. A worthy and wonderful choice. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Unseeking Seeker December 15, 2021 at 6:20 PM Thank you Susan! So happy you liked the poem. The advantage of POTD or contest wins is that the underlying message is more widely read. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year in advance

Bill Baker December 14, 2021 at 10:43 PM Cograts on POTD Unseeking Seeker! Inspiring thoughts in this poem. Your friend, Bill Unseeking Seeker December 15, 2021 at 2:03 AM Thank you dear Bill!

Brandy Nicole December 14, 2021 at 9:16 PM "Live in joy" You can, and that is such a wonderful feeling. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Unseeking Seeker December 15, 2021 at 2:03 AM Thank you Brandy, so happy you resonate!

Gershon Wolf December 14, 2021 at 8:36 PM Gosh. Forget to check POTD this a.m... So happy to see one of yours get the honor. Well-deserved, Seeker. Happiness and Light, Gershon Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 8:53 PM Thank you, Gershon! :)

Connie Marcum Wong December 14, 2021 at 8:11 PM A divine message Seeker. Congratulations on your very deserving POTD honor. Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 8:52 PM Thank you so much, Connie!

Molly Moore December 14, 2021 at 3:42 PM Thank you for this uplifting message. We can't get enough of this kind of energy. Well deserved poem of the day. Molly Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Molly! So happy you enjoyed :)

Jan Allison December 14, 2021 at 2:25 PM excellent ink seeker , many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 5:59 PM Thank you Jan! Happy New Year in advance!

Eve Roper December 14, 2021 at 9:08 AM Unseeking Seeker, congratulations on POTD. Happy Holidays Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 5:59 PM Thank you Eve! Greetings of the season! Enjoy!

Mike Gentile December 14, 2021 at 8:23 AM Congratulations U. Seeker!! I seeker I wish to be and strive to reach the space in which I too can sway ! Love your poem!! Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 8:35 AM Thanks Mike! May the Divine Mother choose to vivify your energy body, as your heart desires!

P.S. Awtry December 14, 2021 at 7:48 AM "to rhythm divine sway"--very nicely done. Congratulations on POTD! Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 7:54 AM Thank you so much, AWTRY!

Constance La France December 14, 2021 at 7:47 AM Seeker, I love your poem and your created form and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 7:54 AM Thank you, Constance! Yes, I’m enjoying writing in the Quietus form. Wish you boundless joy!

Regina Mcintosh December 14, 2021 at 7:43 AM Congrats on POTD :) God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 7:52 AM Thank you dear Gina! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year in advance!

Ann Peck December 14, 2021 at 7:17 AM "Keeping ego at bay" is the toughest. Your words are worthy of reading again and again. Congratulations on POTD! Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 7:37 AM Thank you, Ann! Keeping ego at bay is indeed difficult for as long as we continue to believe we are only this mind-body and not soul eternal

Paula Goldsmith December 14, 2021 at 7:00 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. I love your line, "This life is but a dream." Time does fly by. Have a blessed day.............. Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 7:33 AM A seemingly real, lifelike, lucid dream … thank you, dear Paula!

L Milton Hankins December 14, 2021 at 6:07 AM Beautiful use of the poetry form, Unseeking Seeker. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.! Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 6:28 AM Thanks Milt! Yes, it’s heartening to see Quietus recognised :)

Vijay Pandit December 14, 2021 at 5:18 AM Big congrats on POTD, US. Glad to see your insightful poem recognized. Enjoy your day. Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 5:31 AM Thank you so much, Vijay! Happy New Year in advance

Anitha Jayasankar December 14, 2021 at 4:44 AM Words of wisdom, so well crafted in your own Quietus form ...Seeker. Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 5:30 AM Thank you Anitha! Yes, I’m enjoying the Quietus form :)

Victor Buhagiar December 14, 2021 at 3:57 AM Congrats for your POTD. Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 4:11 AM Thanks Victor! Hope you are doing well

Voodoo Child December 14, 2021 at 2:45 AM I enjoyed this. Well done. Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 3:56 AM Happy you enjoyed, VC

David Kavanagh December 14, 2021 at 2:41 AM Back with congratulations seeker, on a well deserved POTD, all for the right reasons, cheers David Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 3:55 AM Thanks David!

Lin Lane December 14, 2021 at 2:03 AM I am so pleased to see your poem receive poem of the day. Positive thoughts instead of negative ones, Seeker. Cheers to you! Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 3:55 AM Thank you Lin! :)

Tom Cunningham December 14, 2021 at 12:34 AM Back with congratulations US on POTD, a well deserved honour, have a great day. Tom Unseeking Seeker December 14, 2021 at 12:44 AM Thanks for your encouragement Tom!

David Kavanagh December 13, 2021 at 3:16 PM Be self thought, Lament not, where’d you find the words Seeker, impressive penning, cheers David Unseeking Seeker December 13, 2021 at 8:24 PM Thanks David! Happy you enjoyed

Tom Cunningham December 13, 2021 at 8:13 AM Words to live by US, a verse of wisdom. Tom Unseeking Seeker December 13, 2021 at 8:44 AM Thank you, Tom!

Lin Lane December 13, 2021 at 6:32 AM Exceptional advice, Seeker. I've faved this one. Lin Lane December 13, 2021 at 6:43 AM You're very welcome. Unseeking Seeker December 13, 2021 at 6:37 AM Thank you, Lin!