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Written: January 26, 2023 ___________________________________ Let it snow with pearlescent snowflakes each flimsy frost fetches a feat of art Falling from firmament in a graceful dance... a winter symphony that warms the heart gently floating from the velvet sky, as whispers of winter icy embrace each one unique in its fragile design nature gift, adorned with celestial g r a c e In the stillness of night they softly land, blanketing the world in a pristine white a tranquil scene, quiet of w o n d e r a canvas of dreams a breathtaking sight with each snowflake descent, a tale unfolds of whispered secrets and forgotten dreams of hopes and wishes both ripe and raw In this frozen landscape nothing is as it seems as an omnium-gatherum the pearlescent snowflakes, as tiny stars Illuminate the darkness with their gentle glow creating a magical ambiance, a celestial chorus where dreams bear flight, and imaginations grow let it snow with pearlescent snowflakes a spectacle that captures the soul delight In their presence we find solace and peace In this ethereal dance we embrace winter might let it snow, with each snowflake descent let it blanket the world in its pure embrace for within its beauty, we find serenity and in its hushed whispers a sense of grace 1st place contest winner

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Date: 1/28/2024 8:26:00 PM
I agree with Hiya: Oh wowww... The imagery is spectacular, so vivid, lively, enchanting, and dreamy. Hard to pull out one or two descriptions among the rest. Congratulations on your win! "ripe and raw"
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Date: 1/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Oh wowww, what a magnificent and wondrous piece this is, dear Sotto.Without a doubt, one of my most FAVs from you, how beautifully you've described the dwindling of pearlescent snowflakes as they slip upon the mirror-like world and present a spectacular imagery.Your descriptions here are absolutely enchanting, especially "the pearlescent snowflakes, as tiny stars, Illuminate the darkness with their gentle glow","blanketing the world in a pristine white"Also the rhymes & alliteration are gorgeous
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Date: 1/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your beautiful trophy win, I'm so happy for you.. Keep writing and shining always!
Date: 1/28/2024 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations! I knew this will score high. Always a pleasure seeing you win.
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Date: 1/28/2024 12:29:00 AM
Wow ... wow ! What a magical scene you have painted with snowflakes falling as pearlescent gems. Your descriptions are so enchanting that they cool the heart and soul. It seems heaven has come down with snow flakes quietly landing down, blanketing the world. We are indeed transported into a tranquil world.... and unable to liberate ourselves from its icy embrace. Your lay out is wonderful and your descriptions of this snowy night is so captivating !The poem with its smooth flow and choice of words stands out! No wonder it earned you a trophy. Congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 1/27/2024 5:45:00 AM
Creative as ever, my friend. Work of art! Among your countless winning poems!
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Date: 1/26/2024 2:17:00 PM
reading your poem, I was filled with wonder and enchantment regarding pearlescent snowflakes. The structure made me feel like I was a snowflake gently gliding down the screen. I agree, snowflakes are a spectacle that captures the soul with delight...yes, they whisper of grace...so inspirational your poem was, dear Sotto. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 1/26/2024 1:43:00 PM
This is mesmerizing my friend. The delicate format adds to the overall experience. Fabulous work Sotto.
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Date: 1/26/2024 12:50:00 PM
Ah dr sotto what a most enchantingly seasonal poem this is. Creates in a way that is appealing not for the eyes but the soul of the reader. As i read your words, i can see snow swirling and drizzling and the whiteness of the view so divine and poetic. I can see the joy and dancing in ethereal delight to celebrate another season, in the moment , find magic through nature and serenity it bestows! I love the arrangement of words and im sure Brian will do too! Surely a winner! Bol! Pleasure readn
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Date: 1/26/2024 11:24:00 AM
'Let it Snow with Pearlescent Snowflakes' captures the ethereal beauty of winter with exquisite imagery and lyrical grace. The poem evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment as it paints a picture of snowflakes descending from the heavens, each one a delicate masterpiece in its own right. The imagery of 'a winter symphony' and 'whispers of winter's icy embrace' transports the reader to a tranquil landscape blanketed in pristine white..
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