Lake Ontario

urban noise. . .
2000 mile drive
to Lake Ontario
dreamless sleep in tent
till generators charge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Oh, I am with Nette. Those darn generators!! WEll, that is fascinating that you enjoy astrology. I also enjoy numerology and my double 5's cover up some of my Destiny 7. Maybe like in astrology when Taurus kind of hides the reserve of Virgo! ARe you on the cusp of Virgo/Leo? Like my son. My son is Aug 24 and more Virgo than Leo.
Onclaud Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 3:07 PM
darn those generators... beautifully sketched, thomas.. huggs
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Lovely tanka I would love to visit Canada one day:-) hugs jan xx
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