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Lake Envy

She was lake angry beating the britches of the chi city white capped whirlwinds competition for her sisters cul de sac of endless horizon. Lake Mishigami, dreamed of vast, vicious and vicarious power being largest of her five great sisters not third. 4/20/19 YOUR CHOICE(8),any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand

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Date: 4/27/2019 5:35:00 PM
Intense imagery, and very well-written, Janis! Many years ago, we were on a boat crossing Lake Ontario and had to go back due to the overwhelming waves. So, I can picture her sister, Lake Michigan very well! Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/27/2019 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Sandra on first observing this lake, I was overwhelmed by its intensity. They are like seas.
Date: 4/25/2019 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Janis. Well done.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/27/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thanks Line. Blessings.
Date: 4/20/2019 1:50:00 PM
- Great described, Janis :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/27/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes. They paid off. bless you, Janis

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