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Lake Louise

Majestic mountains rise like mounted men, Their faces chiseled from the rugged stone. The evergreens enveiling all the glen Ascend in gowns of green, but leave a crown Of jagged peaks, where shimmering glaciers groan, And tears they shed glide gently ever down. Above the jade-like waves of Lake Louise The sunbeams stream through lightest sapphire skies, Till sunset bursts in blooms of deep cerise. When lying still she mirrors the mountain's face, Or wavelets shine like diamonds in her eyes; What trickled once as tears is joyous grace. Majestic mountains rise like mounted men Above the jade-like waves of Lake Louise. {Written in Cornish Sonnet form using iambic pentameter.}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/30/2014 10:00:00 AM
Hi Isiah, I have been there, and it is as you write in this breathtaking sonnet. Also, I was studying the picture you posted for your contest 'Distant Thoughts', and wrote a sonnet from its inspiration. However, when I went to enter the contest, it was no longer on the list. I missed the boat. Perhaps you would care to read it. bfn Elaine
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Date: 4/13/2014 8:28:00 AM
Well done, I must admit a certain poetic envy to those who can create within forms, some of which I've never hears of before
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Date: 4/12/2014 10:59:00 PM
Beautifully written... Congratulations on your first place win. Verlena
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:42:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ! On the big win:) imaginative write:)
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:01:00 AM
Isaiah a wonderful poem and an awesome win ! Congrats !!
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:30:00 PM
ISAIAH, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:30:00 PM
Isaiah, a very nice win...Linda
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:21:00 PM
I like this. It's really beautiful.
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Date: 4/11/2014 7:24:00 PM
amazing poetry, WOW to your top place. Big congrats on this poem. Love the imagery, Isaiah.
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Date: 4/11/2014 6:26:00 PM
Great write and win Isaiah...congrats
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:17:00 PM
Way to go with this great win..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2014 3:49:00 PM
Lake Louise is certainly a beautiful place and you did it great honor. Congratulations on your first place. Love,Joyce
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Date: 4/11/2014 1:25:00 PM
NICE, beautiful and descriptive. Congrats
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Date: 4/11/2014 1:02:00 PM
A beautiful poem for a beautiful lake – congrats Isaiah
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Date: 3/25/2014 2:40:00 PM
Isaiah you give such a great insight to this beautiful place. Great picture painted of nature's beauty. Great job. Thank You for your nice comment and take care.
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